Bug 180607 - sysutils/zfsnap: grammar error(s) in pkg-descr
Summary: sysutils/zfsnap: grammar error(s) in pkg-descr
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Ports & Packages
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Individual Port(s) (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: Normal Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-ports-bugs (Nobody)
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Blocks:
 
Reported: 2013-07-17 13:50 UTC by N.J. Mann
Modified: 2014-01-18 16:50 UTC (History)
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Attachments
pkg-descr.diff (520 bytes, patch)
2013-07-17 13:50 UTC, N.J. Mann
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Description N.J. Mann 2013-07-17 13:50:00 UTC
	The pkg-descr file for the port sysutils/zfsnap contains grammar errors.
A percentage sign is a suffix not, as here, a prefix - see attached patch.  Also,
the grammar of the first sentence is poor.  Perhaps something like the following
could be used instead:

zfSnap is a simple sh script for creating ZFS snapshots.  When called from cron
rolling snapshots can be created and deleted automatically.
Comment 1 Edwin Groothuis freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-07-17 13:50:10 UTC
Maintainer of sysutils/zfsnap,

Please note that PR ports/180607 has just been submitted.

If it contains a patch for an upgrade, an enhancement or a bug fix
you agree on, reply to this email stating that you approve the patch
and a committer will take care of it.

The full text of the PR can be found at:
    http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=ports/180607

-- 
Edwin Groothuis via the GNATS Auto Assign Tool
edwin@FreeBSD.org
Comment 2 Edwin Groothuis freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-07-17 13:50:11 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->feedback

Awaiting maintainers feedback (via the GNATS Auto Assign Tool)
Comment 3 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2014-01-18 16:44:18 UTC
Author: rakuco
Date: Sat Jan 18 16:44:11 2014
New Revision: 340195
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/ports/340195
QAT: https://qat.redports.org/buildarchive/r340195/

Log:
  Improve wording in pkg-descr.
  
  PR:		ports/180607
  Submitted by:	"N.J. Mann" <njm@njm.me.uk>
  Approved by:	maintainer timeout (185 days)

Modified:
  head/sysutils/zfsnap/pkg-descr

Modified: head/sysutils/zfsnap/pkg-descr
==============================================================================
--- head/sysutils/zfsnap/pkg-descr	Sat Jan 18 16:39:41 2014	(r340194)
+++ head/sysutils/zfsnap/pkg-descr	Sat Jan 18 16:44:11 2014	(r340195)
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
-zfSnap is simple sh script to make rolling zfs snapshots with cron. Main
-advantage of zfSnap is that it's written in %100 pure /bin/sh, doesn't
+zfSnap is a simple sh script for creating ZFS snapshots. When called from
+cron rolling snapshots can be created and deleted automatically. The main
+advantage of zfSnap is that it is written in 100% pure /bin/sh, does not
 require any additional software to run, and is simple to use.
 
 zfSnap keeps all information about snapshot in snapshot name. zfs snapshot
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Comment 4 Raphael Kubo da Costa freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2014-01-18 16:44:22 UTC
State Changed
From-To: feedback->closed

Committed. Thanks!