Bug 136061 - grammar nits in ipfw.8
Summary: grammar nits in ipfw.8
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: Normal Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
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Reported: 2009-06-26 04:50 UTC by Ben Kaduk
Modified: 2009-08-06 09:56 UTC (History)
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Description Ben Kaduk 2009-06-26 04:50:01 UTC
There are a couple of grammar nits in the man page -- one use of 'as' instead of 'are', and an incomplete sentence.

Fix: 

patch is available at
http://stuff.mit.edu/afs/sipb.mit.edu/user/kaduk/freebsd/patches/ipfw.8.diff.2009.06.25
How-To-Repeat: man ipfw
Comment 1 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2009-06-26 06:09:10 UTC
Author: maxim
Date: Fri Jun 26 05:09:00 2009
New Revision: 195036
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/195036

Log:
  o Kill grammar nits.
  
  PR:		docs/136061
  Submitted by:	Ben Kaduk
  MFC after:	1 week

Modified:
  head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8

Modified: head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8
==============================================================================
--- head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Fri Jun 26 05:08:32 2009	(r195035)
+++ head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Fri Jun 26 05:09:00 2009	(r195036)
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ file systems are mounted (yet) by the ti
 is being run (e.g.\& when they are mounted over NFS).
 Once
 .Fl p
-has been specified, any additional arguments as passed on to the preprocessor
+has been specified, any additional arguments are passed on to the preprocessor
 for interpretation.
 This allows for flexible configuration files (like conditionalizing
 them on the local hostname) and the use of macros to centralize
@@ -1941,7 +1941,7 @@ with
 .Dq "options HZ=1000"
 to reduce
 the granularity to 1ms or less).
-Default value is 0, meaning no delay.
+The default value is 0, meaning no delay.
 .Pp
 .It Cm burst Ar size
 If the data rate exceeds the pipe bandwith limit
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Comment 2 Maxim Konovalov freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2009-06-26 06:09:14 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->patched

Fixed in HEAD.  Thanks!
Comment 3 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2009-06-26 15:45:44 UTC
miwi        2009-06-26 14:45:26 UTC

  FreeBSD ports repository

  Modified files:
    security/clamtk      Makefile distinfo pkg-plist 
  Log:
  - Update to 4.15
  
  PR:             136061
  Submitted by:   Ports Fury
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.21      +2 -2      ports/security/clamtk/Makefile
  1.16      +3 -3      ports/security/clamtk/distinfo
  1.9       +1 -0      ports/security/clamtk/pkg-plist
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Comment 4 Maxim Konovalov freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2009-08-06 09:56:04 UTC
State Changed
From-To: patched->closed

Merged to RELENG_7.