Bug 218070 - ral.4 Grammar fix
Summary: ral.4 Grammar fix
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: Sevan Janiyan
URL: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10262
Keywords: patch
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2017-03-24 17:04 UTC by bassej4
Modified: 2017-04-04 13:20 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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Grammar Fix diff file (964 bytes, patch)
2017-03-24 17:04 UTC, bassej4 		no flags Details | Diff
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Description bassej4 2017-03-24 17:04:11 UTC 
Created attachment 181146 [details]
Grammar Fix diff file

In the 2nd paragraph of the Description, there are improper uses of 'an' that needs to be changed to 'a'.

In the last paragraph of the CAVEATS Section contains unclear wording and misuse of plurals.
Comment 1 Sevan Janiyan freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2017-04-03 20:15:33 UTC 
Just as a heads up, the Nm macro would expand to ral when the manual is read via the man command. You don't need to state ral in the start of the line in your change.
Comment 2 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2017-04-04 13:19:45 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: sevan
Date: Tue Apr  4 13:18:56 UTC 2017
New revision: 316488
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/316488

Log:
  Replace an with a
  Reword caveat on PCI 2.2 requirement.

  PR:		218070
  Submitted by:	<bassej4 AT rpi edu>
  Approved by:	bcr
  MFC after:	5 days
  Differential Revision:	 https://reviews.freebsd.org/D10262

Changes:
  head/share/man/man4/ral.4
Comment 3 Sevan Janiyan freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2017-04-04 13:20:23 UTC 
Committed with minor adjustment, thank you for the patch!