<https://www.freebsd.org/portmgr/charter/>: > … FreeBSD. The Ports Management Team (portmgr) is … – then: > … The primary responsibility of the portmgr team is … – that's like saying: the Ports Management Team team Instead: > … The primary responsibility of portmgr is … – or: > … The primary responsibility of the Team is …
Also, whilst there … 1) superfluous uppercase: > … responsibilities, The Ports Management Team may … – should be lowercase t (the); the Ports Management Team 2) the unordered list of nine items, two of which comprise two sentences, I would: a) make each listing begin lowercase b) where there's a second sentence within a point, make it a separate point with additional indent c) punctuate only the final listing with '.' – compare with the style of the four-point list under <https://www.freebsd.org/portmgr/policies/#_assure_the_integrity_of_the_ports_collection>. All subject to approval by portmgr@ and core@
A commit in branch main references this bug: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=6e662fa25bf3b2bff4bd07b60575b681c1748b57 commit 6e662fa25bf3b2bff4bd07b60575b681c1748b57 Author: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla@FreeBSD.org> AuthorDate: 2022-07-24 10:56:14 +0000 Commit: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla@FreeBSD.org> CommitDate: 2022-07-24 10:56:14 +0000 Fix minor typos in portmgr charter PR: 265267 Submitted by: grahamperrin website/content/en/portmgr/charter.adoc | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
Graham I fixed the typos. I'm gonna close this PR. Can you please open a review with the changes you want to make to the "specific responsibilities" list?