Bug 273983 - Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter
Summary: Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Many People
Assignee: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado
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Reported: 2023-09-20 18:08 UTC by Benjamin Spiegel
Modified: 2023-09-20 18:15 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

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Description Benjamin Spiegel 2023-09-20 18:08:51 UTC 
Created attachment 245074 [details]
Suggested patch

I've just finished reading the new Jails chapter in the handbook (https://cgit.freebsd.org/doc/commit/?id=612b7cc1). It looks terrific--carlavilla@ did a great job rewriting this chapter!

I spotted some minor issues: one TODO placeholder to add a missing xref and various nitpicky grammar and style issues throughout (e.g. typos, comma splices, serial comma, title case, etc.).

Attached is a patch with suggested fixes and copyedits. I corrected the usage but tried to avoid any substantive changes. Happy to adjust if you have feedback or questions.

Thanks for considering!
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2023-09-20 18:14:51 UTC 
A commit in branch main references this bug:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=093e79e3b3016943d38a9b6b0c0909a2d37631e1

commit 093e79e3b3016943d38a9b6b0c0909a2d37631e1
Author:     Benjamin Spiegel <bspiegel100@gmail.com>
AuthorDate: 2023-09-20 18:13:46 +0000
Commit:     Sergio Carlavilla Delgado <carlavilla@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-09-20 18:13:46 +0000

    Handbook - Jails: Improvements, fix typos

    PR:             273983

 .../content/en/books/handbook/jails/_index.adoc    | 204 +++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 103 insertions(+), 101 deletions(-)
Comment 2 Sergio Carlavilla Delgado freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2023-09-20 18:15:24 UTC 
Done!
Thanks for the improvements!