Bug 31951 - Improved language for the 'diskless' handbook section
Summary: Improved language for the 'diskless' handbook section
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: Normal Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
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Reported: 2001-11-13 08:50 UTC by Jean-Francois Dockes
Modified: 2001-11-14 15:56 UTC (History)
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Description Jean-Francois Dockes 2001-11-13 08:50:01 UTC 
The diskless section in the doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter was initially committed before I could integrate some of the  
suggestions for language improvement. These improvements follow in the attached patch.
Comment 1 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2001-11-14 15:56:11 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed with minor modifications.  It may take up to 24 hours for 
this change to reach the website.  r1.110 in CVS contains the fix. 
Thanks for the submission!