Bug 43260 - [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
Summary: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: Normal Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
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Reported: 2002-09-22 19:30 UTC by Martin Heinen
Modified: 2002-09-30 15:10 UTC (History)
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Description Martin Heinen 2002-09-22 19:30:01 UTC 
	- added full stops at the end of sentences,
	- change some markup,
	- CISCO -> Cisco,
	- replace & with 'and'.

How-To-Repeat: 	
	Read the chapter "PPP and SLIP".
Comment 1 Murray Stokely freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2002-09-30 15:10:01 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Your changes have been submitted.  I also noticed some other problems 
in that chapter, and corrected some of them.  If you want to spend 
some more time on this, there is a lot of very poor English grammar 
that could be improved.  Thanks for your submissions!