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	  &ldquo;Don't use contractions&rdquo; would be wrong.</para>
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	  &ldquo;Don't use contractions&rdquo; would be wrong.</para>
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	<para>Avoiding contractions makes for a more formal tone, is more
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	<para>Avoiding contractions makes for a more formal tone, is more
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	  precise, and slightly easier for translators.</para>
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	  precise, and is slightly easier for translators.</para>
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    </varlistentry>
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      <term>Use the serial comma</term>
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      <term>Use the serial comma</term>
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      <listitem>
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	<para>In a list of items within a paragraph, seperate each item from
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	<para>In a list of items within a paragraph, separate each item from
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	  the others with a comma.  Seperate the last item from the others with
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	  the others with a comma.  Seperate the last item from the others with
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	  a comma and the word &ldquo;and&rdquo;.</para>
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	  a comma and the word &ldquo;and&rdquo;.</para>
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	<para>For example, look at the following quote;</para>
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	<para>For example, look at the following:</para>
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	<blockquote>
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	<blockquote>
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	  <para>This is a list of one, two and three items.</para>
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	  <para>This is a list of one, two and three items.</para>
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	  &ldquo;two&rdquo;, and &ldquo;three&rdquo;, or a list of two items,
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	  &ldquo;two&rdquo;, and &ldquo;three&rdquo;, or a list of two items,
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	  &ldquo;one&rdquo; and &ldquo;two and three&rdquo;?</para>
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	  &ldquo;one&rdquo; and &ldquo;two and three&rdquo;?</para>
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	<para>It is better to be explicit and include a serial comma;</para>
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	<para>It is better to be explicit and include a serial comma:</para>
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	<blockquote>
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	<blockquote>
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	  <para>This is a list of one, two, and three items.</para>
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	  <para>This is a list of one, two, and three items.</para>
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	  <application>emacs</application>.</para>
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	  <application>emacs</application>.</para>
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	<para>While it may be argued that a capital letter following
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	<para>While it may be argued that a capital letter following
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	  the end of sentence period, this is not the case, especially
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	  a period denotes a new sentence, this is not the case, especially
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	  in name usage.  <quote>Jordan K. Hubbard</quote> is a good
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	  in name usage.  <quote>Jordan K. Hubbard</quote> is a good
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	  example; it has a capital <literal>H</literal> following a
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	  example; it has a capital <literal>H</literal> following a
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	  period and a space, and there certainly isn't a new sentence
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	  period and a space, and there certainly isn't a new sentence
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  </variablelist>
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  </variablelist>
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  <para>For more information about writing style, see <ulink
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  <para>For more information about writing style, see <ulink
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      url="http://www.columbia.edu/acis/bartleby/strunk/">Elements of
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      url="http://www.bartleby.com/141/index.html">Elements of
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      Style</ulink>, by William Strunk.</para>
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      Style</ulink>, by William Strunk.</para>
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  <sect1>
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  <sect1>

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