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>--- doc/zh_TW.Big5/articles/nanobsd/article.sgml.orig	2009-11-07 17:03:57.000000000 +0800
>+++ doc/zh_TW.Big5/articles/nanobsd/article.sgml	2009-11-07 23:39:14.000000000 +0800
>@@ -1,9 +1,3 @@
>-
> <!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook V4.1-Based Extension//EN" [
> <!ENTITY % articles.ent PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES DocBook FreeBSD Articles Entity Set//EN">
> %articles.ent;
>@@ -36,7 +30,7 @@
>     <abstract>
>       <para>³o½g¤å¥ó´£¨Ñ¤FÃö©ó <application>NanoBSD</application> ¤u¨ãªº±¡³ø¤¶²Ð¡A
> 	³o¤u¨ã¥i¥Î¨Ó«Ø¥ß¥Î©ó´O¤J¦¡Àô¹ÒÀ³¥Îµ{¦¡ªº &os; ¨t²Î¬M¹³ÀÉ¡A
>-	¥H«K¦s©ñ¨ì Compact Flash ¥d(©ÎÀH¨ºÐ)¡C</para>
>+	¥H«K¦s©ñ¨ì Compact Flash ¥d¡]©Î¨ä¥LÀx¦s¸Ë¸m¡^¡C</para>
>     </abstract>
>   </articleinfo>
> 
>@@ -47,13 +41,13 @@
> 
>     <para><application>NanoBSD</application> ¬O &a.phk; ¥Ø«e¥¿¦b¶}µoªº¤@¶µ¤u¨ã¡C
>       ¥¦¥i¥Î¨Ó«Ø¥ß¥Î©ó´O¤J¦¡Àô¹ÒÀ³¥Îµ{¦¡ªº &os; ¨t²Î¬M¹³ÀÉ¡A
>-      ¥H«K¦s©ñ¨ì Compact Flash ¥d(©ÎÀH¨ºÐ¡Amass storage medium)¡C</para>
>+      ¥H«K¦s©ñ¨ì Compact Flash ¥d¡]©Î¨ä¥LÀx¦s¸Ë¸m¡^¡C</para>
> 
>     <para>³o¤@¤u¨ã¤]¥i¥H¥Î¨Ó¦Û»s¦w¸Ë¬M¹³ÀÉ¡A
>-      ¥HÂ²¤Æ«UºÙ¬° <quote>´O¤J¦¡¨t²Î(computer appliances)</quote> ªº¨t²Î¦w¸Ë¡BºûÅ@¤u§@¡C 
>+      ¥HÂ²¤Æ«UºÙ¬° <quote>´O¤J¦¡¨t²Î¡]computer appliances¡^</quote> ªº¨t²Î¦w¸Ë¡BºûÅ@¤u§@¡C
>       ³q±`¡A¨CÓ´O¤J¦¡¨t²Î²£«~³£¦³©wµwÅé©M³nÅé¡A
>       ©ÎªÌ´«¨¥¤§¡A©Ò¦³ªºÀ³¥Îµ{¦¡³£¬O¹w¥ý¸Ë¦nªº¡C
>-      ³o¨Ç³]³Æ¥i¥Hª½±µ©ñ¨ì²{¦³ªººô¸ô¤¤¡A¦Ó¥B(´X¥G¬O)¥ß§Y¨Ï¥Î¡C</para>
>+      ³o¨Ç³]³Æ¥i¥Hª½±µ©ñ¨ì²{¦³ªººô¸ô¤¤¡A¦Ó¥B¡]´X¥G¬O¡^¥ß§Y¨Ï¥Î¡C</para>
> 
>     <para><application>NanoBSD</application> ´£¨Ñªº¥\¯à¥]¬A¡G</para>
> 
>@@ -89,8 +83,8 @@
>     <sect2 id="design">
>       <title>NanoBSD ªº³]p</title>
> 
>-      <para>¤@¥¹±N¬M¹³ÀÉ¦s¤J´O¤J¦¡µwÅé¡A´N¥i¥H¥Î¥¦¨Ó¤Þ¾É <application>NanoBSD</application>
>-	¤F¡C ¹w³]±¡ªp¤U¡AÀH¨ºÐ·|¹º¤À¬°¤T³¡¤À¡G</para>
>+      <para>¤@¥¹±N¬M¹³ÀÉ¦s¤J´O¤J¦¡µwÅé¡A´N¥i¥H¥Î <application>NanoBSD</application>
>+        ¶}¾÷¡C¹w³]±¡ªp¤U¡AÀx¦s¸Ë¸m·|¹º¤À¬°¤T³¡¤À¡G</para>
> 
>       <itemizedlist>
> 	<listitem>
>@@ -100,22 +94,23 @@
> 
> 	<listitem>
> 	  <para>¤@Ó³]©wÀÉ¤À³Î°Ï¡A¦b¹B¦æÀô¹Ò¤¤¡A
>-	    ¥i¥H±N¨ä±¾¸ü(mount)¨ì <filename role="directory">/cfg</filename> ¥Ø¿ý¤U¡C</para>
>+	    ¥i¥H±N¨ä±¾¸ü¡]mount¡^¨ì <filename class="directory">/cfg</filename> ¥Ø¿ý
>+	    ¤U¡C</para>
> 	</listitem>
>       </itemizedlist>
> 
>       <para>³o¨Ç¤À³Î°Ï¡A¦b¹w³]±¡ªp¤U¬O¥H°ßÅª¤è¦¡±¾¸ü¡C</para>
> 
>-      <para><filename role="directory">/etc</filename> ©M
>-	<filename role="directory">/var</filename> ¥Ø¿ý§¡¬°
>-	&man.md.4;(malloc)ºÏºÐ¡C</para>
>+      <para><filename class="directory">/etc</filename> ©M
>+	<filename class="directory">/var</filename> ¥Ø¿ý§¡¬°
>+	&man.md.4;¡]malloc¡^ºÏºÐ¡C</para>
> 
>       <para>³]©wÀÉªº¤À³Î°Ï«h¬O¦b
>-	<filename role="directory">/cfg</filename> ¥Ø¿ý¡C
>-	¥¦¥]§t¤F¥Î©ó <filename role="directory">/etc</filename>
>-	¥Ø¿ýªºÀÉ®×¡A¦b±Ò°Ê¤§«á¼È®É¥H°ßÅª¤è¦¡±¾¸ü¡C ¦]¦¹¡AY·Qn«¶}¾÷«O¯d·sªº³]©w¡A
>-	¨º»òn°O±o±q <filename role="directory">/etc</filename> §â§ï¹LªºÀÉ®×½Æ»s¦^
>-	<filename role="directory">/cfg</filename> ¥Ø¿ý¤~¦æ¡C</para>
>+	<filename class="directory">/cfg</filename> ¥Ø¿ý¡C
>+	¥¦¥]§t¤F <filename class="directory">/etc</filename>
>+	¥Ø¿ýªºÀÉ®×¡A¦b±Ò°Ê¤§«á¼È®É¥H°ßÅª¤è¦¡±¾¸ü¡C¦]¦¹¡AY·Qn«¶}¾÷«á«O¯d·sªº³]©w¡A
>+	¨º»òn°O±o§â§ï¹LªºÀÉ®×±q <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> ½Æ»s¦^
>+	<filename class="directory">/cfg</filename> ¥Ø¿ý¤~¦æ¡C</para>
> 
>       <example>
> 	<title>§â×§ï¹L <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> ³]©w«O¦s°_¨Ó</title>
>@@ -129,12 +124,12 @@
> 
>       <note>
> 	<para>¥u¦³¦b¨t²Î±Ò°Ê¹Lµ{¤¤¡A¥H¤Î»Ýn×§ï³]©wÀÉªº®ÉÔ¡A¤~»Ýn±¾¸ü§t¦³
>-	  <filename role="directory">/cfg</filename> ªº¨ºÓ¤À³Î°Ï¡C</para>
>+	  <filename class="directory">/cfg</filename> ªº¤À³Î°Ï¡C</para>
> 
>-	<para>¤@ª½³£±¾¸ü <filename role="directory">/cfg</filename>
>+	<para>¤@ª½±¾¸ü <filename class="directory">/cfg</filename>
> 	  ¤£¬O¤@Ó¦n¥D·N¡A¯S§O¬O·í±z§â <application>NanoBSD</application>
>-	  ©ñ¦b¤£¾A¦X¶i¦æ¤j¶q¼g¤J°Ê§@ªº¤À³Î°Ï®É
>-	 (¤ñ¦p¡G¥Ñ©óÀÉ®×¨t²Îªº¦P¨B¤Æ·|©w´Á¦b¨t²ÎºÐ¤º¼g¤J¸ê®Æ)¡C</para>
>+	  ©ñ¦b¤£¾A¦X¶i¦æ¤j¶q¼g¤J°Ê§@ªºÀx¦s¸Ë¸m®É
>+	 ¡]¤ñ¦p¡G¥Ñ©óÀÉ®×¨t²Îªº¦P¨B¤Æ·|©w´Á¦b¨t²ÎºÐ¤º¼g¤J¸ê®Æ¡^¡C</para>
>       </note>
>     </sect2>
> 
>@@ -143,8 +138,8 @@
> 
>       <para><application>NanoBSD</application> ¬M¹³ÀÉ¬O³z¹L¨Ï¥Î«D±`Â²³æªº
> 	<filename>nanobsd.sh</filename> shell  script ¨Ó¥´³yªº¡A³oÓ script ¥i¥H¦b
>-	<filename role="directory"><replaceable>/usr</replaceable>/src/tools/tools/nanobsd</filename>
>-	¥Ø¿ý¤¤§ä¨ì¡C ³oÓ script «Ø¥ßªº¬M¹³ÀÉ¡A¥i¥H¥Î &man.dd.1; ¤u¨ã¨Ó½Æ»s¨ìÀH¨ºÐ¤W¡C</para>
>+	<filename class="directory"><replaceable>/usr</replaceable>/src/tools/tools/nanobsd</filename>
>+	¥Ø¿ý¤¤§ä¨ì¡C³oÓ script «Ø¥ßªº¬M¹³ÀÉ¡A¥i¥H¥Î &man.dd.1; ¤u¨ã¨Ó½Æ»s¨ìÀH¨ºÐ¤W¡C</para>
> 
>       <para>¥´³y
> 	<application>NanoBSD</application> ¬M¹³ÀÉ©Ò»Ýªº«ü¥O¬O¡G</para>
>@@ -168,7 +163,7 @@
> 	</callout>
> 
> 	<callout arearefs="nbsd-dd">
>-	  <para>¦bÀH¨ºÐ¤W¦w¸Ë <application>NanoBSD</application>¡C</para>
>+	  <para>±N <application>NanoBSD</application> ¦w¸Ë¨ìÀx¦s¸Ë¸m¤W¡C</para>
> 	</callout>
>       </calloutlist>
>     </sect2>
>@@ -177,16 +172,16 @@
>       <title>¦Û¦æ¥´³y NanoBSD ¬M¹³ÀÉ</title>
> 
>       <para>³o¥i¯à¬O <application>NanoBSD</application> ³Ì¬°«n¡A
>-	¦P®É¤]¬O±z³Ì·P¿³½ìªº¥\¯à¡C ¦P®É¡A¦b¶}µo
>-	<application>NanoBSD</application> À³¥Îµ{¦¡®É¡A³o¤]¬O¬Û·í¯Ó®Éªº¹Lµ{¡C</para>
>+	¦P®É¤]¬O±z³Ì·P¿³½ìªº¥\¯à¡C¦P®É¡A¦b¶}µo
>+	<application>NanoBSD</application> ®É¡A³o¤]³Ì¯Ó®É¶¡ªº¹Lµ{¤§¤@¡C</para>
> 
>-      <para>°õ¦æ¤U±ªº«ü¥O±N·|
>-	<filename>nanobsd.sh</filename> Åª¨ú¥Ø«e©Ò¦b¥Ø¿ýªº
>+      <para>°õ¦æ¤U±ªº«ü¥O·|¨Ï
>+	<filename>nanobsd.sh</filename> ¥Ø«e©Ò¦bªº¥Ø¿ýÅª¨ú
> 	<filename>myconf.nano</filename> ÀÉªº³]©w¡G</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>sh nanobsd.sh -c myconf.nano</userinput></screen>
> 
>-      <para>¦Û¦æ¥´³yªº¬yµ{¡A¥u»Ý¨âÓ¨BÆJ¡G</para>
>+      <para>¦Û¦æ¥´³yªº¬yµ{¡A¦³¨âºØ¤è¦¡¡G</para>
> 
>       <itemizedlist>
> 	<listitem>
>@@ -202,42 +197,45 @@
> 	<title>¦Ûq¿ï¶µ</title>
> 
>         <para>³z¹L×§ï³]©w¡A¥i¥H³]©w¥Î©ó
>-          <application>NanoBSD</application> ¥´³y¹Lµ{¤¤ <literal>buildworld</literal>
>-          ©M <literal>installworld</literal> ¶¥¬qªº½sÄ¶¡B¦w¸Ë¿ï¶µ¡A¥H¤Î
>-          <application>NanoBSD</application> ¥Dn¥´³y¹Lµ{¤¤ªº¿ï¶µ¡C
>-          ³z¹L¨Ï¥Î³o¨Ç¿ï¶µ¥i¥H«d´î¨t²Îªº¤Ø¤o¡A¨Ï¤§¯à°÷©ñ¤J
>-          64 MB ªºÀH¨ºÐ¡C ±zÁÙ¥i¥H¶i¤@¨B³z¹L³o¨Ç¿ï¶µ¨Ó«d´î &os;¡A
>+          <application>NanoBSD</application> ¥´³y¹Lµ{¤¤ <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget>
>+          ©M <maketarget>installworld</maketarget> ¶¥¬qªº½sÄ¶¡B¦w¸Ë¿ï¶µ¡A¥H¤Î
>+          <application>NanoBSD</application> ¥Dn¥´³y¹Lµ{¤¤¤º³¡ªº¿ï¶µ¡C³z
>+          ¹L³o¨Ç¿ï¶µ¥i¥H«d´î¨t²Îªº¤Ø¤o¡A¨Ï¤§¯à°÷©ñ¤J
>+          64 MB ªºÀH¨ºÐ¡C±zÁÙ¥i¥H¶i¤@¨B³z¹L³o¨Ç¿ï¶µ¨Ó«d´î &os;¡A
>           ª½¨ì¥¦¥u¥]§t kernel ¥H¤Î¨â¤TÓ userland ÀÉ®×¬°¤î¡C</para>
> 
>-	<para>³]©wÀÉ®×¤¤¥]§t¥Î¥H¥N´À¹w³]Èªº³]©w¿ï¶µ¡CÂ²¤¶³Ì«nªº´X¶µ³]©w¦p¤U¡G</para>
>+	<para>³]©wÀÉ®×¤¤¥]§t¥Î¥H¥N´À¹w³]Èªº³]©w¿ï¶µ¡C³Ì«nªº´X¶µ³]©w¦p¤U¡G</para>
> 
> 	<itemizedlist>
> 	  <listitem>
>-	    <para><literal>NANO_NAME</literal> &mdash; ¥»¦¸¥´³yªº¦WºÙ(©Ò«Ø¥ß¤u§@¥Ø¿ýªº¦WºÙ)¡C</para>
>+	    <para><literal>NANO_NAME</literal> &mdash;
>+	      ¥»¦¸¥´³yªº¦WºÙ¡]©Ò«Ø¥ß¤u§@¥Ø¿ýªº¦WºÙ¡^¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
>-	    <para><literal>NANO_SRC</literal> &mdash; ¥Î¥H½sÄ¶¡B¥´³y¬M¹³ÀÉªº source tree ªº¦ì¸m¡C</para>
>+	    <para><literal>NANO_SRC</literal> &mdash; ¥Î¥H½sÄ¶¡B¥´³y¬M¹³ÀÉªº
>+	      source tree ªº¦ì¸m¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
>-	    <para><literal>NANO_KERNEL</literal> &mdash; ³]©w¥Î¨Ó½sÄ¶ªº kernel ³]©wÀÉÀÉ¦W¡C</para>
>+	    <para><literal>NANO_KERNEL</literal> &mdash; ³]©w¥Î¨Ó½sÄ¶ kernel
>+	      ªº³]©wÀÉÀÉ¦W¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
> 	    <para><literal>CONF_BUILD</literal> &mdash; ¥Î©ó
>-	      <literal>buildworld</literal> ¥´³y¶¥¬qªº¿ï¶µ¡C</para>
>+	      <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget> ¶¥¬qªº¿ï¶µ¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
> 	    <para><literal>CONF_INSTALL</literal> &mdash; ¥Î©ó
>-	      <literal>installworld</literal> ¥´³y¶¥¬qªº¿ï¶µ¡C</para>
>+	      <maketarget>installworld</maketarget> ¶¥¬qªº¿ï¶µ¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
> 	    <para><literal>CONF_WORLD</literal> &mdash; ¥Î©ó
>-	      <literal>buildworld</literal> ©M
>-	      <literal>installworld</literal> ³o¨âÓ¥´³y¶¥¬qªº¿ï¶µ¡C</para>
>+	      <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget> ©M
>+	      <maketarget>installworld</maketarget> ³o¨âÓ¶¥¬qªº¿ï¶µ¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
>@@ -250,49 +248,67 @@
>       <sect3>
> 	<title>¦Ûq¥\¯à</title>
> 
>-	<para>³z¹L¦b³]©wÀÉ®×¤¤¨Ï¥Î shell ¨ç¼Æ¡A¥i¥H¶i¤@¨B·L½Õ
>-	  <application>NanoBSD</application>¡C Á|¨Ò»¡©ú¤@¤U¦Û¦æ¥´³y¨ç¼Æªº°ò¥»¤è¦¡¡G</para>
>+	<para>³z¹L¦b³]©wÀÉ®×¤¤¨Ï¥Î shell ¨ç¦¡¡A¥i¥H¶i¤@¨B·L½Õ
>+	  <application>NanoBSD</application>¡CÁ|¨Ò»¡©ú¤@¤U¦Ûq¨ç¦¡ªº°ò¥»¤è¦¡¡G</para>
> 
>-	  <programlisting>cust_foo()(
>+	  <programlisting>cust_foo () (
> 	echo "bar=topless" &gt; \
> 		&dollar;{NANO_WORLDDIR}/etc/foo
> )
> customize_cmd cust_foo</programlisting>
> 
>-        <para>¤U±Á|§ó¹ê»ÚÂIªº¨Ò¤l¡A¥¦·|§â¹w³]ªº
>-          <filename role="directory">/etc</filename> ¥Ø¿ý¤j¤p¡A±q 5MB ½Õ¾ã¬° 30MB¡G</para>
>+	<para>¤U±Á|§ó¹ê»ÚÂIªº¨Ò¤l¡A¥¦·|§â <filename class="directory">/etc</filename>
>+           ¥Ø¿ý¹w³]ªº¤j¤p¡A±q 5MB ½Õ¾ã¬° 30MB¡G</para>
> 
>-	<programlisting>cust_etc_size()(
>+	<programlisting>cust_etc_size () (
> 	cd &dollar;{NANO_WORLDDIR}/conf
> 	echo 30000 &gt; default/etc/md_size
> )
> customize_cmd cust_etc_size</programlisting>
> 
>-	<para>°£¦¹¤§¥~¡AÁÙ¦³´XÓ¹w³]ªº¥\¯à©w¸q¥i¥H¥Î¨Ó¦Ûq¡G</para>
>+	<para>°£¦¹¤§¥~¡AÁÙ¦³´XÓ¹w³]ªº¦Ûq¨ç¦¡¥i¥H¨Ï¥Î¡G</para>
> 
> 	<itemizedlist>
> 	  <listitem>
>-	    <para><literal>cust_comconsole</literal> &mdash; ¦b¹w³] VGA Åã¥Ü¥d¤W°±¥Î &man.getty.8;
>-	     (<filename>/dev/ttyv*</filename>)¨Ã±Ò¥Î serial port ªº COM1 ¥H§@¬°¨t²Î console¡C</para>
>+	    <para><literal>cust_comconsole</literal> &mdash; ¦b VGA ¸Ë¸m¤W°±¥Î
>+              &man.getty.8;¡]<filename>/dev/ttyv*</filename>¡^¨Ã±Ò¥Î serial port
>+	      ªº COM1 ¥H§@¬°¨t²Î console¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
>-	    <para><literal>cust_allow_ssh_root</literal> &mdash; ¤¹³\ &man.sshd.8;
>-	      ¥i¥H¥Î <username>root</username> ±b¸¹µn¤J¡C</para>
>+	    <para><literal>cust_allow_ssh_root</literal> &mdash; ¤¹³\ 
>+	      <username>root</username> ¥i¥H¥Î &man.sshd.8; µn¤J¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
> 	  <listitem>
> 	    <para><literal>cust_install_files</literal> &mdash;
>-	      ±q <filename role="directory">nanobsd/Files</filename>
>-	      ¥Ø¿ý¤¤¦w¸ËÀÉ®×¡A³o¥]§t¤@¨Ç¹ê¥Îªº¨t²ÎºÞ²z script ¡C</para>
>+	      ±q <filename class="directory">nanobsd/Files</filename>
>+	      ¥Ø¿ý¤¤¦w¸ËÀÉ®×¡A³o¥]§t¤@¨Ç¹ê¥Îªº¨t²ÎºÞ²z script¡C</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 	</itemizedlist>
>       </sect3>
> 
>       <sect3>
>-	<title>³]©wÀÉ®×Á|¨Ò</title>
>+	<title>¦w¸Ë packages</title>
>+
>+	<para>Packages ¥i¥HÂÇ¥Ñ¦Ûq¨ç¦¡¥[¤J <application>NanoBSD</application>
>+	  ªº¦L¶HÀÉ¡C¤U±ªº¨ç¦¡·|¦w¸Ë¦ì©ó
>+	  <filename>/usr/src/tools/tools/nanobsd/packages</filename>
>+	  ªº packages¡G</para>
>+
>+	<programlisting>install_packages () (
>+mkdir -p ${NANO_WORLDDIR}/packages
>+cp /usr/src/tools/tools/nanobsd/packages/* ${NANO_WORLDDIR}/packages
>+chroot ${NANO_WORLDDIR} sh -c 'cd packages; pkg_add -v *;cd ..;'
>+rm -rf ${NANO_WORLDDIR}/packages
>+)
>+customize_cmd install_packages</programlisting>
>+      </sect3>
>+
>+      <sect3>
>+	<title>³]©wÀÉ®×½d¨Ò</title>
> 
>-	<para>¤U±¬O¥Î©ó¦Û¦æ¥´³yªº <application>NanoBSD</application> ¬M¹³ÀÉªº§¹¾ã¨Ò¤l¡G</para>
>+	<para>¤U±¬O¥Î©ó¦Û¦æ¥´³yªº <application>NanoBSD</application> ¬M¹³ÀÉªº§¹¾ã½d¨Ò¡G</para>
> 
> 	<programlisting>NANO_NAME=custom
> NANO_SRC=/usr/src
>@@ -335,7 +351,7 @@
> 
> FlashDevice SanDisk 1G
> 
>-cust_nobeastie()(
>+cust_nobeastie() (
> 	touch &dollar;{NANO_WORLDDIR}/boot/loader.conf
> 	echo "beastie_disable=\"YES\"" &gt;&gt; &dollar;{NANO_WORLDDIR}/boot/loader.conf
> )
>@@ -358,12 +374,13 @@
> 	</step>
> 
> 	<step>
>-	  <para>±N·sªº¬M¹³ÀÉ©ñ¤J¥¿¹B¦æªº
>+	  <para>±N·sªº¬M¹³ÀÉ¤W¶Ç¦Ü¥¿¦b¹B¦æªº
> 	    <application>NanoBSD</application> ¤¤¥¼¥Îªº¤À³Î°Ï¤§¤@¡C</para>
> 
> 	  <para>»P¤§«e³Ìªì¦w¸Ë <application>NanoBSD</application> ªº¨BÆJ¬Û¤ñ¡A
>-	    ³o¤@¨BÆJ³Ì«nªº°Ï§O¦b©ó¡G³o¦¸¤£¥Î <filename>_.disk.full</filename> ÀÉ(¥¦¥]§t¾ãÓºÏºÐªº¬M¹³ÀÉ)¡A
>-	    ¦ÓÀ³¦w¸Ë <filename>_.disk.image</filename> ¬M¹³ÀÉ(³oÓÀÉ®×¤¤¡A¥u¥]§t¤@Ó¨t²Î¤À³Î°Ï)¡C</para>
>+	    ³o¤@¨BÆJ³Ì«nªº°Ï§O¦b©ó¡G³o¦¸¤£¥Î <filename>_.disk.full</filename>
>+	    ÀÉ¡]¥¦¥]§t¾ãÓºÏºÐªº¬M¹³ÀÉ¡^¡A ¦ÓÀ³¦w¸Ë <filename>_.disk.image</filename>
>+	    ¬M¹³ÀÉ¡]³oÓÀÉ®×¤¤¡A¥u¥]§t¤@Ó¨t²Î¤À³Î°Ï¡^¡C</para>
> 	</step>
> 
> 	<step>
>@@ -376,20 +393,20 @@
> 
> 	<step>
> 	  <para>¦pªGµo¥Í¤F¥ô¦ó°ÝÃD¡A«h¥i¥H±q¥ý«eªº¤À³Î°Ï±Ò°Ê
>-	 (¨ä¤¤¥]§t¤FÂÂªº¡B ¥i¥Îªº¬M¹³ÀÉ)¡A¨ÓºÉ§Ö«ì´_¨t²Î¥\¯à¡C
>-	  ±µ¤U¨Ó¥i¥H×¥¿·s½sÄ¶ªºª©¥»¤¤¦s¦bªº°ÝÃD¡A¨Ã«½Æ«ez¨BÆJ¡C</para>
>+	    ¡]¨ä¤¤¥]§t¤FÂÂªº¡B¥i¥Îªº¬M¹³ÀÉ¡^¡A¨ÓºÉ§Ö«ì´_¨t²Î¥\¯à¡C
>+	    ±µ¤U¨Ó¥i¥H×¥¿·s½sÄ¶ªºª©¥»¤¤¦s¦bªº°ÝÃD¡A¨Ã«½Æ«ez¨BÆJ¡C</para>
> 	</step>
>       </procedure>
> 
>       <para>n¦b¥¿¦b¹B¦æªº
> 	<application>NanoBSD</application> ¨t²Î¤¤¦w¸Ë·sªº¬M¹³ÀÉ¡A¥i¥H¨Ï¥Î¦ì©ó
>-	<filename role="directory">/root</filename> ¥Ø¿ýªº
>+	<filename class="directory">/root</filename> ¥Ø¿ýªº
> 	<filename>updatep1</filename> ©Î
>-	<filename>updatep2</filename>  script ¡A
>+	<filename>updatep2</filename> script ¡A
> 	¹ê»Ú¤Wn¥Îþ¤@Ó script¡A«h¨ú¨M©ó¥¿¦b¹B¦æªº¨t²Î¬O¦ì©óþÓ¤À³Î°Ï¦Ó©w¡C</para>
> 
>-      <para>ÀH®É´£¨Ñ·s <application>NanoBSD</application> ¬M¹³ÀÉ©Ò´£¨ÑªºªA°È¡A
>-	¥H¤Î±Ä¥Îªº¶Ç¿é¤èªkªº¤£¦P¡A±z¥i¥H°Ñ¦Ò¨Ã¨Ï¥Î¤U¦C¤TºØ¤è¦¡¤§¤@¡G</para>
>+      <para>µø´£¨Ñ·s <application>NanoBSD</application> ¬M¹³ÀÉªº¥D¾÷©Ò´£¨ÑªºªA°È¡A
>+	¥H¤Î§Æ±æ±Ä¥Îªº¶Ç¿é¤è¦¡¡A±z¥i¥H°Ñ¦Ò¨Ã¨Ï¥Î¤U¦C¤TºØ¤è¦¡¤§¤@¡G</para>
> 
>       <sect3>
> 	<title>¨Ï¥Î &man.ftp.1;</title>
>@@ -403,7 +420,7 @@
>       <sect3>
> 	<title>¨Ï¥Î &man.ssh.1;</title>
> 
>-	<para>¦pªG·Q§ó¦w¥þªº¸Ü¡AÀ³°Ñ¦Ò¤U±¨Ò¤l¡G</para>
>+	<para>¦pªG·Q¨Ï¥Î¥[±K³s½uªº¸Ü¡AÀ³°Ñ¦Ò¤U±¨Ò¤l¡G</para>
> 
> 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ssh myhost cat _.disk.image.gz | zcat | sh updatep1</userinput></screen>
>       </sect3>
>@@ -415,7 +432,8 @@
> 
> 	<procedure>
> 	  <step>
>-	    <para>º¥ý¡A¦b´£¨Ñ¬M¹³ÀÉªº¥D¾÷¤W¶}±Ò TCP listen¡A¨ÃÅý¥¦§â¬M¹³ÀÉ¶Çµ¹ client¡G</para>
>+	    <para>º¥ý¡A¦b´£¨Ñ¬M¹³ÀÉªº¥D¾÷¤W¶}±Ò TCP listener¡A¨ÃÅý¥¦§â¬M¹³ÀÉ¶Çµ¹
>+	      client¡G</para>
> 
> 	    <screen>myhost&prompt.root; <userinput>nc -l <replaceable>2222</replaceable> &lt; _.disk.image</userinput></screen>
> 
>@@ -425,7 +443,7 @@
> 	    </note>
> 	  </step>
> 	  <step>
>-	    <para>³s¨ì´£¨Ñ·s¬M¹³ÀÉªA°Èªº¥D¾÷¡A¨Ã°õ¦æ <filename>updatep1</filename> ³o¤ä script¡G</para>
>+	    <para>³s¨ì´£¨Ñ·s¬M¹³ÀÉªº¥D¾÷¡A¨Ã°õ¦æ <filename>updatep1</filename> ³o¤ä script¡G</para>
> 	      
> 	    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>nc myhost <replaceable>2222</replaceable> | sh updatep1</userinput></screen>
> 	  </step>
>--- nanobsd-article.sgml.patch ends here ---

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