Attachment 157462 Details for Bug 200673 – gmultipath.8: Various grammar improvements

[patch] gmultipath.8: Various grammar improvements

gmultipath.8-Various-grammar-improvements.diff (text/plain), 2.70 KB, created by Fabian Keil on 2015-06-06 10:40:08 UTC

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>From 22ee06e15397d5dba85a7787f238d699f8a25270 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
>From: Fabian Keil <fk@fabiankeil.de>
>Date: Mon, 4 May 2015 13:28:07 +0200
>Subject: [PATCH] gmultipath.8: Various grammar improvements
>
>Obtained from: ElectroBSD
>---
> sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 | 23 ++++++++++++-----------
> 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
>
>diff --git a/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8 b/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8
>index 07ac01e..a13a52b 100644
>--- a/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8
>+++ b/sbin/geom/class/multipath/gmultipath.8
>@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
> .\"
> .\" $FreeBSD$
> .\"
>-.Dd April 18, 2012
>+.Dd April 5, 2015
> .Dt GMULTIPATH 8
> .Os
> .Sh NAME
>@@ -253,14 +253,15 @@ This I/O continues until an I/O is returned with
> a generic I/O error or a "Nonexistent Device" error.
> When this occurs, that path is marked FAIL, the next path
> in a list is selected as active and the failed I/O reissued.
>-In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O same time.
>+In Active/Active mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle I/O
>+at the same time.
> Requests are distributed between paths to equalize load.
>-For capable devices it allows to utilize bandwidth of all paths.
>-In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads same time,
>-but unlike Active/Active only one path handles write requests at any
>-point in time.
>-It allows to closer follow original write request order if above layer
>-needs it for data consistency (not waiting for requisite write completion
>+For capable devices it allows to utilize the bandwidth of all paths.
>+In Active/Read mode all paths not marked FAIL may handle reads at the
>+same time, but unlike in Active/Active mode only one path handles write
>+requests at any point in time.
>+It allows to closer follow the original write request order if the layer
>+above needs it for data consistency (not waiting for requisite write completion
> before sending dependent write).
> .Pp
> When new devices are added to the system the
>@@ -269,9 +270,9 @@ GEOM class is given an opportunity to taste these new devices.
> If a new
> device has a
> .Nm MULTIPATH
>-on-disk metadata label, the device is used to either create a new
>+on-disk metadata label, the device is either used to create a new
> .Nm MULTIPATH
>-GEOM, or been added the list of paths for an existing
>+GEOM, or added to the list of paths for an existing
> .Nm MULTIPATH
> GEOM.
> .Pp
>@@ -281,7 +282,7 @@ and
> .Xr mpt 4
> based Fibre Channel disk devices.
> For these devices, when a device disappears
>-(due e.g., to a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is
>+(due to e.g. a cable pull or power failure to a switch), the device is
> proactively marked as gone and I/O to it failed.
> This causes the
> .Nm MULTIPATH
>-- 
>2.4.2
>

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