Attachment 175162 Details for Bug 212992 – Diff file for changes made to "article.xml"

[patch] Diff file for changes made to "article.xml"

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Created: 2016-09-25 23:04:36 UTC

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>Index: article.xml
>===================================================================
>--- article.xml	(revision 49425)
>+++ article.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -82,8 +82,8 @@
>       <orderedlist>
> 	<listitem>
> 	  <para>Read through the FAQ and Handbook periodically.  If
>-	    anything is badly explained, out of date or even just
>-	    completely wrong, let us know.  Even better, send us a fix
>+	    anything is poorly explained, ambiguous, out of date or
>+            incorrect, let us know.  Even better, send us a fix
> 	    (Docbook is not difficult to learn, but there is no
> 	    objection to ASCII submissions).</para>
> 	</listitem>
>@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
> 	  <para>Help translate FreeBSD documentation into your native
> 	    language.  If documentation already exists for your
> 	    language, you can help translate additional documents or
>-	    verify that the translations are up-to-date.  First take a
>+	    verify that the translations are up-to-date and correct.  First take a
> 	    look at the <link xlink:href="&url.books.fdp-primer;/translations.html">Translations
> 	      FAQ</link> in the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer.
> 	    You are not committing yourself to translating every
>@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@
> 	    even regularly).  It can be very satisfying to share your
> 	    expertise and help people solve their problems; sometimes
> 	    you may even learn something new yourself!  These forums
>-	    can also be a source of ideas for things to work
>-	    on.</para>
>+	    can also be a source of ideas for things to improve upon.
>+          </para>
> 	</listitem>
>       </orderedlist>
>     </sect2>
>@@ -118,8 +118,8 @@
>     <sect2 xml:id="ongoing-programmer-tasks">
>       <title>Ongoing Programmer Tasks</title>
> 
>-      <para>Most of the tasks listed here require either a
>-	considerable investment of time, or an in-depth knowledge of
>+      <para>Most of the tasks listed here may require a
>+	considerable investment of time, an in-depth knowledge of
> 	the FreeBSD kernel, or both.  However, there are also many
> 	useful tasks which are suitable for
> 	<quote>weekend hackers</quote>.</para>
>@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
> 	</listitem>
> 
> 	<listitem>
>-	  <para>Read the &a.bugs;.  There might be a problem you can
>+	  <para>Read the &a.bugs;.  There may be a problem you can
> 	    comment constructively on or with patches you can test.
> 	    Or you could even try to fix one of the problems
> 	    yourself.</para>

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