Attachment 175801 Details for Bug 213519 – combo patch for website

[patch] combo patch for website

improve_wording_diff.out (text/plain), 8.24 KB, created by Mark Linimon on 2016-10-16 00:12:17 UTC

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>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/whyusefreebsd.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/whyusefreebsd.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/advocacy/whyusefreebsd.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
> <h2>The Community</h2>
> 
> &os; is a community-driven operating system despite it being
>-	sponsored corporately. &os; has active mailing lists,
>+	to a partial degree sponsored corporately. &os; has active mailing lists,
> 	forums, and IRC channels where experienced users and
> 	developers are always willing to help the less
> 	experienced.
>@@ -109,11 +109,11 @@
> Unlike some other systems, &os; maintains a clean division
> 	between the base system and third-party ports and packages.
> 	All third-party software goes in /usr/local, so if you want to
>-	repurpose a machine then it's trivial to simply delete all
>+	repurpose a machine, it's trivial to simply delete all
> 	installed packages and then start installing the ones that you
> 	want.
> 
>- The pkg tool makes working with binary packages
>+ The pkg(8) tool makes working with binary packages
> 	even easier, although source installs are still supported for
> 	people who want the level of configurability that this
> 	implies.
>@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
> 	snapshot and roll back if it didn't work.
> 
> If you're using jails, then ZFS lets you clone an existing
>-	jail in under a second, irrespective of how big the jail
>+	jail in under a second, no matter how big the jail
> 	itself is.
> 
> <h2>GEOM</h2>
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community/mailinglists.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community/mailinglists.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/community/mailinglists.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@
> 	 href="mailto:freebsd@lists.enderunix.org">freebsd@lists.enderunix.org</a>.</li>
> </ul>
> 
>- If you create other FreeBSD mailing lists, <a
>+ If you create other FreeBSD mailing lists, please <a
> 	href="&base;/mailto.html">let us know about them</a>.
> 
> 
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/current.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/current.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/current.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
> &lt;<a href="mailto:doc@FreeBSD.org">doc@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;,
> Wolfram Schneider &lt;<a href="mailto:wosch@FreeBSD.org">wosch@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;
> 
>- Synopsis:Modify the CGI script ports.cgi
>+ Synopsis: Modify the CGI script ports.cgi
> and the script portindex to use the Perl <a
> href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~tom/portpm/">FreeBSD::Ports</a>
> modules. These modules also need thorough testing.
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/docproj.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/docproj.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/docproj/docproj.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
> quirks.
> 
> In addition, FreeBSD will be the first exposure to a Unix-like
>- operating system for many of its users, so the availability of high
>+ operating system for some of its users, so the availability of high
> quality, accurate documentation is paramount.
> 
> The FreeBSD Documentation Project exists to help fill this gap. There
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/mailto.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/mailto.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/mailto.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
> 
> Questions or suggestions about our documentation (<a
> 	href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/index.html">Handbook</a>, <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html">FAQ</a>, <a
>-	href="&base;/docs.html">Books &amp; Articles</a>) should be addressed to the
>+	href="&base;/docs.html">Books &amp; Articles</a>, and so forth) should be addressed to the
> FreeBSD Documentation Project mailing list, <a
> 	href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.
> 
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/projects/newbies.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
> 
> The latest &os; releases are available <a
> 	href="&enbase;/where.html">here</a>. Before you begin,
>- carefully read the <a
>+	please carefully read the <a
> 	href="&url.books;/handbook/bsdinstall.html">installation
> 	instructions</a>.
> 
>@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
> 	offer another support channel. Many users have written various
> 	tutorials and lots of new users receive help there.</li>
> 
>- <li><a href="&base;/search/search.html">Search</a> the
>+ <li>You may <a href="&base;/search/search.html">search</a> the
> 	Handbook and FAQ, the whole web site, or the &os; mailing list
> 	archives.</li>
> 
>@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
> 	user.</li>
> 
> <li><a href="http://www.pfsense.org">pfSense</a> is a &os;
>-	free network security solution, based on &os;. pfSense
>+	based network security solution. pfSense
> 	software, with the help of the package system, is able to
> 	provide the same functionality or more of common commercial
> 	firewalls, without any of the artificial limitations. It has
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/search/sitemap.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/search/sitemap.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/search/sitemap.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
> </term>
> 
> <term>
>- <text>CVS Repository</text>
>+ <text>Source Code Repository</text>
> <destination>&base;/developers/cvs.html</destination>
> </term>
> 
>@@ -1314,7 +1314,7 @@
> </item>
> 
> <item>
>- <text>CVS Repository</text>
>+ <text>Source Code Repository</text>
> <destination>&base;/developers/cvs.html</destination>
> </item>
> 
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml	(revision 49512)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
> formats including CD (disc1), DVD (dvd1), and Network Install
> (bootonly) sized ISO
> Disc Images, as well as regular and mini USB memory stick
>- images. Later versions of &os; are also offered as prebuilt
>+ images. Recent versions of &os; are also offered as prebuilt
> expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Card images for embedded
> platforms.
> 
>@@ -447,8 +447,8 @@
> 	tools aimed at ease of use for the casual computer
> 	user.</li>
> 
>- <li><a href="http://www.pfsense.org">pfSense</a> is a free,
>-	open source customized distribution of &os; tailored for
>+ <li><a href="http://www.pfsense.org">pfSense</a> is a
>+	&os; based customized distribution tailored for
> 	use as a firewall and router.</li>
> </ul>
> 
>@@ -461,9 +461,13 @@
> The &os; Ports Collection is a diverse collection of utility
> and application software that has been ported to &os;.
> 
>+ See <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports.html">
>+ Installing Applications: Packages and Ports</a>
>+ in the Handbook.
>+
> <ul class="txtdownloadlist">
>- <li><a href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/">&os;
>-	 Ports Collection</a></li>
>+ <li><a href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/">Download the &os;
>+	 Ports Collection framework</a></li>
> 
> <li><a href="&base;/ports/index.html">Web interface to the Ports
> 	 Collection</a></li>
>Index: share/xml/header.ent
>===================================================================
>--- share/xml/header.ent	(revision 49512)
>+++ share/xml/header.ent	(working copy)
>@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
> <li><a href="https://www.freebsdfoundation.org/">Foundation</a>
> 	<ul>
> 	 <li><a href="https://www.freebsdfoundation.org/donate/">Monetary Donations</a></li>
>-	 <li><a href="&base;/donations/">Hardware Donations</a></li>
>+	 <li><a href="&base;/donations/index.html#systems">Hardware Donations</a></li>
> 	</ul>
> </li>
> </ul>

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