Attachment 189043 Details for Bug 224531 – FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview improvement.

FDP Primer, Chapter 1, Section 1.1 Overview improvement.

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>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	(revision 51331)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -29,7 +29,9 @@
>      POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
> 
> -->
>-<chapter xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="overview">
>+<chapter xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
>+  xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0"
>+  xml:id="overview">
>   <title>Overview</title>
> 
>   <para>Welcome to the &os; Documentation Project
>@@ -74,8 +76,8 @@
>       documentation.  First, subscribe to the &a.doc;.  Some team
>       members also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
>       <acronym>IRC</acronym> channel on
>-      <link xlink:href="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</link>.  These people
>-      can help with questions or problems involving the
>+      <link xlink:href="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</link>.  These
>+      people can help with questions or problems involving the
>       documentation.</para>
> 
>     <procedure>
>@@ -86,9 +88,10 @@
> 	  This meta-package installs all of the software needed to
> 	  edit and build &os; documentation.  The
> 	  <application>Subversion</application> package is needed to
>-	  obtain a working of the documentation and generate patches with.</para>
>+	  obtain a working copy of the documentation and generate
>+	  patches with.</para>
> 
>-         <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install docproj subversion</userinput></screen>
>+	 <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install docproj subversion</userinput></screen>
>       </step>
> 
>       <step>
>@@ -222,7 +225,9 @@
> 
>       <listitem>
> 	<para><emphasis>Web site</emphasis>: This is the main &os;
>-	  presence on the web, visible at <link xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/index.html">https://www.FreeBSD.org/</link>
>+	  presence on the web, visible at <link
>+	    xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/index.html">
>+	    https://www.FreeBSD.org/</link>
> 	  and many mirrors around the world.  The web site is
> 	  typically a new user's first exposure to &os;.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -243,11 +248,13 @@
> 
>     <para>Documentation commit messages are visible with
>       <command>svn log</command>.  Commit messages are also
>-      archived at <uri xlink:href="&a.svn-doc-all.url;">&a.svn-doc-all.url;</uri>.</para>
>+      archived at <uri xlink:href="&a.svn-doc-all.url;">
>+	&a.svn-doc-all.url;</uri>.</para>
> 
>-    <para>Web frontends to both of these repositories are available at <link
>-      xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/"></link> and <link
>-        xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/base/"></link>.</para>
>+    <para>Web frontends to both of these repositories are available
>+      at <link xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/"></link>
>+      and <link
>+	xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/base/"></link>.</para>
> 
>     <para>Many people have written tutorials or how-to articles about
>       &os;.  Some are stored as part of the <acronym>FDP</acronym>

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