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>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	(revision 53498)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
>       covers various aspects of the &os;&nbsp;Project, such as its
>       history, goals, development model, and so on.</para>
> 
>-    <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
>+    <para>After reading this chapter you will know:</para>
> 
>     <itemizedlist>
>       <listitem>
>@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@
> 	applications developed by research centers and universities
> 	around the world, often available at little to no cost.</para>
> 
>-      <para>Because the source code for &os; itself is generally
>+      <para>Because the source code for &os; itself is freely 
> 	available, the system can also be customized to an almost
> 	unheard of degree for special applications or projects, and in
> 	ways not generally possible with operating systems from most
>@@ -229,8 +229,7 @@
> 		</indexterm>
> 		<indexterm>
> 		  <primary>email</primary>
>-		</indexterm>
>-		Email servers</para>
>+		</indexterm>Email servers</para>
> 	    </listitem>
> 
> 	    <listitem>
>@@ -314,7 +313,7 @@
> 
> 	<listitem>
> 	  <para><emphasis>Software Development:</emphasis>  The basic
>-	    &os; system comes with a full complement of development
>+	    &os; system comes with a full suite of development
> 	    tools including a full
> 	    C/C++<indexterm>
> 	      <primary>Compiler</primary>
>@@ -737,14 +736,14 @@
>       </indexterm>
> 
>       <para>The &os;&nbsp;Project had its genesis in the early part
>-	of 1993, partially as an outgrowth of the Unofficial
>-	386BSDPatchkit by the patchkit's last 3 coordinators: Nate
>-	Williams, Rod Grimes and Jordan Hubbard.</para>
>+	of 1993, partially as the brainchild of the Unofficial
>+	386BSD-Patchkit's last 3 coordinators: Nate Williams,
>+	Rod Grimes and Jordan Hubbard.</para>
> 
>       <indexterm><primary>386BSD</primary></indexterm>
>       <para>The original goal was to produce an intermediate snapshot
>-	of 386BSD in order to fix a number of problems with it that
>-	the patchkit mechanism just was not capable of solving.  The
>+	of 386BSD in order to fix a number of problems that 
>+	the patchkit mechanism was just not capable of solving.  The
> 	early working title for the project was 386BSD 0.5 or 386BSD
> 	Interim in reference of that fact.</para>
> 
>@@ -882,7 +881,7 @@
> 	least on the side of enforced access rather than the usual
> 	opposite.  Due to the additional complexities that can evolve
> 	in the commercial use of GPL software we do, however, prefer
>-	software submitted under the more relaxed BSD copyright when
>+	software submitted under the more relaxed BSD license when
> 	it is a reasonable option to do so.</para>
>     </sect2>
> 
>@@ -971,9 +970,10 @@
> 	      and Ports Collection repositories also moved from
> 	      <application>CVS</application> to
> 	      <application>SVN</application> in May 2012 and July
>-	      2012, respectively.  Please refer to the <link
>-		linkend="synching">Synchronizing your source
>-		tree</link> section for more information on obtaining
>+		2012, respectively.  Please refer to the <link 
>+		linkend="synching"> Obtaining the Source</link>
>+		section for more information on
>+		 obtaining
> 	      the &os; <literal>src/</literal> repository and <link
> 		linkend="ports-using">Using the Ports
> 		Collection</link> for details on obtaining the &os;

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