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>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	(revision 42517)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -23,12 +23,13 @@
>     <title>Synopsis</title>
> 
>     <para>This chapter will cover some of the more frequently used
>-      network services on &unix; systems.  We will cover how to
>-      install, configure, test, and maintain many different types of
>-      network services.  Example configuration files are included
>-      throughout this chapter for you to benefit from.</para>
>+      	network services on &unix; systems.  This will include how to
>+      	install, configure, test, and maintain the many different types 
>+	of network services.  As an added convenience, example 
>+	configuration files are included throughout this chapter 
>+	for you to benefit from.</para>
> 
>-    <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
>+    <para>At the end of this chapter, readers should know:</para>
> 
>     <itemizedlist>
> 
>@@ -38,41 +39,39 @@
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>How to set up a network file system.</para>
>+	<para>How to set up the Network File System
>+	(<acronym>NFS</acronym>).</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>How to set up a network information server for sharing
>-	  user accounts.</para>
>+	<para>How to set up the network information server
>+	(<acronym>NIS</acronym>) for centralizing and sharing user accounts.
>+	</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>How to set &os; up to act as an <acronym>LDAP</acronym>
>-	  server or client</para>
>+	  server or client.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>How to set &os; up to act as an <acronym>LDAP</acronym>
>-	  server or client</para>
>-      </listitem>
>-
>-      <listitem>
> 	<para>How to set up automatic network settings using
>-	  DHCP.</para>
>+	  <acronym>DHCP</acronym>.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>How to set up a domain name server.</para>
>+	<para>How to set up a domain name server
>+	(<acronym>DNS</acronym>).</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>How to set up the <application>Apache</application>
>-	  HTTP Server.</para>
>+	  <acronym>HTTP</acronym> Server.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>How to set up a File Transfer Protocol (FTP)
>-	  Server.</para>
>+	<para>How to set up a File Transfer Protocol
>+	(<acronym> FTP</acronym>) Server.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>@@ -82,7 +81,8 @@
> 
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>How to synchronize the time and date, and set up a
>-	  time server, with the NTP protocol.</para>
>+	time server with the Network Time Protocol
>+	(<acronym>NTP</acronym>).</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
> 
>     </itemizedlist>
> 
>-    <para>Before reading this chapter, you should:</para>
>+    <para>Reading this chapter assumes a basic knowledge of:</para>
> 
>     <itemizedlist>
>       <listitem>
>@@ -102,11 +102,11 @@
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Be familiar with basic network terminology.</para>
>+	<para>Basic network terminology.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Know how to install additional third-party
>+	<para>Ability to install additional third-party
> 	  software (<xref linkend="ports"/>).</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>@@ -210,12 +210,12 @@
> 	single IP address from requesting any service more than 60
> 	times in any given minute.</para>
> 
>-      <para>Although we mention rate-limiting options below, novice
>-	users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually do
>-	not need to be modified.  These options may be useful if
>-	an excessive amount of connections are being established.
>-	A full list of options can be found in the
>-	&man.inetd.8; manual.</para>
>+      <para>Although the following examples include rate-limiting
>+	options below, novice users should be aware that
>+	these parameters usually do not need to be modified.
>+	These options may be useful if an excessive amount of
>+	connections are being established.  A full list of
>+	options can be found in the &man.inetd.8; manual page.</para>
> 
>       <variablelist>
> 	<varlistentry>
>@@ -1850,7 +1850,7 @@
> 
> 	      <note>
> 		<para>Keep in mind that at least one local account
>-		  (i.e. not imported via NIS) must exist in
>+		  (i.e., not imported via NIS) must exist in
> 		  <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename> and this
> 		  account should also be a member of the group
> 		  <groupname>wheel</groupname>.  If there is something

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