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>--- chapter.sgml.orig	Fri Jun 22 03:49:11 2001
>+++ chapter.sgml	Fri Jun 22 15:52:37 2001
>@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
>       your head sideways meant <emphasis>yes</emphasis>. Quickly, I
>       started nodding my head up and down. The vendor noticed, took
>       his almonds, and walked away. To an uninformed observer, I did
>-      not changed the body language: I continued using the language of
>+      not change the body language: I continued using the language of
>       shaking and nodding my head. What changed was the
>       <emphasis>meaning</emphasis> of the body language. At first, the
>       vendor and I interpreted the same language as having completely
>@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@
> 
>   </sect1>
> 
>-  <sect1 id="sockets-essetial-functions">
>+  <sect1 id="sockets-essential-functions">
>     <title>Essential Socket Functions</title>
> 
>     <para>While FreeBSD offers different functions to work with
>@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@
> 
> 	  <para>Use <constant>PF_INET</constant> for
> 	    <acronym>UDP</acronym>, <acronym>TCP</acronym> and other
>-	    Internet protocols.</para>
>+	    Internet protocols (<acronym>IP</acronym>v4).</para>
> 
> 	  <para>Five values are defined for the
> 	    <varname>type</varname> argument, again, in
>@@ -385,11 +385,14 @@
> 	    <quote><constant>SOCK_</constant></quote>.  The most
> 	    common one is <constant>SOCK_STREAM</constant>, which
> 	    tells the system you are asking for a <emphasis>reliable
>-	    stream delivery service</emphasis>.</para>
>+	    stream delivery service</emphasis> (which is
>+	    <acronym>TCP</acronym> when used with
>+	    <constant>PF_INET</constant>).</para>
> 
> 	  <para>If you asked for <constant>SOCK_DGRAM</constant>, you
> 	    would be requesting a <emphasis>connectionless datagram
>-	    delivery service</emphasis>.</para>
>+	    delivery service</emphasis> (in our case,
>+	    <acronym>UDP</acronym>).</para>
> 
> 	  <para>If you wanted to be in charge of the low-level
> 	    protocols (such as <acronym>IP</acronym>), or even network
>@@ -710,7 +713,7 @@
> 	    usually do not know whether it stores data <emphasis>most
> 	    significant byte</emphasis> (<acronym>MSB</acronym>) or
> 	    <emphasis>least significant byte</emphasis>
>-	    (<acronym>LSB</acronym>) byte first.</para>
>+	    (<acronym>LSB</acronym>) first.</para>
> 
> 	  <para>You might be wondering, <emphasis><quote>So, will
> 	    sockets not handle it for me?</quote></emphasis></para>
>@@ -1271,7 +1274,7 @@
> 	    successfully, we are ready to become a
> 	    <emphasis>daemon</emphasis>: We use
> 	    <function>fork</function> to create a child process. In
>-	    both, the parent and the child the <varname>s</varname>
>+	    both, the parent and the child, the <varname>s</varname>
> 	    variable is our socket. The parent process will not need
> 	    it, so it calls <function>close</function>, then it
> 	    returns <constant>0</constant> to inform its own parent it
>@@ -1395,7 +1398,7 @@
> 	  <para>Now, go ahead, save the above source code as
> 	    <filename>daytimed.c</filename> (it is customary to end
> 	    the names of daemons with the letter
>-	    <constant>d</constant>. After you have compiled it, try
>+	    <constant>d</constant>). After you have compiled it, try
> 	    running it:</para>
> 
> <screen>
>@@ -1466,7 +1469,7 @@
> 
> whizkid          ttyp0   Jun 19 16:59   (216.127.220.143)
> xxx              ttyp1   Jun 19 16:06   (xx.xx.xx.xx)
>-&prompt.user; <userinput>telnet 216.127.220.107 13</userinput>
>+&prompt.user; <userinput>telnet 216.127.220.143 13</userinput>
> 
> Trying 216.127.220.143...
> Connected to r47.bfm.org.

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