Attachment 15534 Details for Bug 28777 – patch

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patch (text/plain), 3.25 KB, created by Giorgos Keramidas on 2001-07-06 19:40:01 UTC

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Created: 2001-07-06 19:40:01 UTC

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>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml
>===================================================================
>RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml,v
>retrieving revision 1.16
>diff -u -r1.16 article.sgml
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml	2001/06/04 03:04:38	1.16
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml	2001/07/06 17:51:04
>@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
> 	    composed of contiguous sectors.  Slices are recorded in a
> 	    <quote>slice table</quote> used by the system BIOS to
> 	    locate bootable partitions.  The slice table is usually
>-	    called the Partition Table in DOS parlance.  Maintained by
>+	    called the <quote>partition table</quote> in DOS parlance.  Maintained by
> 	    the fdisk utility.</para>
> 	</listitem>
> 
>@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
> 	</step>
> 
> 	<step>
>-	  <para>When warned about Writing on installed systems, answer
>+	  <para>When warned about writing on installed systems, answer
> 	    <command>Yes</command>.</para>
> 	</step> 
> 
>@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@
> 	<step>
> 	  <para>Enter <command>W</command> when done and confirm to
> 	    continue.  The filesystem will be newfs'd for you, unless
>-	    you select otherwise (for news partitions you'll want to
>+	    you select otherwise (for new partitions you'll want to
> 	    do this!).  You'll get the error: 
> 
> 	    <informalexample>
>@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@
>     <sect2>
>       <title>Making Dedicated Mode Disks Using the Command Line</title>
> 
>-      <para>Execute the following commands, replacing ad2 with the
>+      <para>Execute the following commands, replacing <devicename>ad2</devicename> with the
> 	disk name.</para>
> 
>       <informalexample>
>@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@
> 
>       <para>The command line is the easiest way to make dedicated
> 	disks, and the worst way to make compatibility disks.  The
>-	command-line fdisk utility requires higher math skills and an
>+	command-line <command>fdisk</command> utility requires higher math skills and an
> 	in-depth understanding of the slice table, which is more than
> 	most people want to deal with.  Use sysinstall for
> 	compatibility disks, as described below.</para>
>@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@
> 
> 	<step>
> 	  <para>The filesystem will be newfs'd for you, unless you
>-	    select otherwise (for news partitions you'll want to do
>+	    select otherwise (for new partitions you'll want to do
> 	    this!).  You'll get the error:
> 
> 	    <informalexample>
>@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@
> 	    </programlisting>
> 	  </informalexample>
> 	  
>-	  <para>Change /dev/ad0b to the device of the newly added
>+	  <para>Change <filename>/dev/ad0b</filename> to the device of the newly added
> 	    space.</para>
> 	</step>
> 
>@@ -591,13 +591,11 @@
>       be at least 128 kB, and it should not be not be a power of 2.</para>
> 
>       <para>Now you can mount and use your CCD by referencing device
>-	/dev/ccd0c.</para>
>-<para>
>-A more powerful and flexible alternative to CCD is Vinum.  See the <ulink
>-URL="http://www.vinumvm.org/">Vinum Project home page</ulink> for further
>-details
>-</para>
>+	<filename>/dev/ccd0c</filename>.</para>
> 
>+      <para>A more powerful and flexible alternative to CCD is Vinum.  See the
>+        <ulink URL="http://www.vinumvm.org/">Vinum Project home page</ulink>
>+        for further details.</para>
>     </sect2>
>   </sect1>

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