Attachment 186409 Details for Bug 222351 – handbook typos patch

handbook typos patch

handbook.diff.txt (text/plain), 5.66 KB, created by Lubos Boucek on 2017-09-15 09:58:51 UTC

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>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	(revision 50829)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
> 	    <acronym>Intel64</acronym>.  Other manufacturers sometimes
> 	    call it <acronym>x86-64</acronym>.</para>
> 
>-	  <para>Examples of &arch.amd64; compatible processsors
>+	  <para>Examples of &arch.amd64; compatible processors
> 	    include: &amd.athlon;64, &amd.opteron;,
> 	    multi-core &intel;&nbsp;&xeon;, and
> 	    &intel;&nbsp;&core;&nbsp;2 and later processors.</para>
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml	(revision 50829)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install kwebkitpart</userinput></screen>
> 
>-      <para>To install from the Ports Colloction:</para>
>+      <para>To install from the Ports Collection:</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/www/kwebkitpart</userinput>
> &prompt.root; <userinput>make install clean</userinput></screen>
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	(revision 50829)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -3141,7 +3141,7 @@
> 	</varlistentry>
>       </variablelist>
> 
>-      <para>This example configures an encryped swap partition using
>+      <para>This example configures an encrypted swap partition using
> 	the Blowfish algorithm with a key length of 128 bits and a
> 	sectorsize of 4 kilobytes:</para>
> 
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml	(revision 50829)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -3002,7 +3002,7 @@
> 	<varlistentry>
> 	  <term>TCP_FLAG|ICMP_TYPE</term>
> 	  <listitem>
>-	    <para>If <literal>tcp</literal> is specifed as the
>+	    <para>If <literal>tcp</literal> is specified as the
> 	      PROTO_TYPE, flags can be specified as letters, where
> 	      each letter represents one of the possible
> 	      <acronym>TCP</acronym> flags used to determine the state
>@@ -3016,7 +3016,7 @@
> 	      <literal>C</literal> (CWN), and
> 	      <literal>E</literal> (ECN).</para>
> 
>-	    <para>If <literal>icmp</literal> is specifed as the
>+	    <para>If <literal>icmp</literal> is specified as the
> 	      PROTO_TYPE, the <acronym>ICMP</acronym> type to match
> 	      can be specified.  Refer to &man.ipf.5; for the
> 	      allowable types.</para>
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml	(revision 50829)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@
> 	provides an alternative, command-line <acronym>MP3</acronym>
> 	player.  Once installed, specify the <acronym>MP3</acronym>
> 	file to play on the command line.  If the system has multiple
>-	audio devices, the sound device can also be specifed:</para>
>+	audio devices, the sound device can also be specified:</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mpg123 <replaceable>-a /dev/dsp1.0 Foobar-GreatestHits.mp3</replaceable></userinput>
> High Performance MPEG 1.0/2.0/2.5 Audio Player for Layers 1, 2 and 3
>@@ -1342,7 +1342,7 @@
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install mythtv</userinput></screen>
> 
>-      <para>Alternatively, to install from the Ports Collecton:</para>
>+      <para>Alternatively, to install from the Ports Collection:</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/multimedia/mythtv</userinput>
> &prompt.root; <userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	(revision 50829)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@
> 	the most prudent security or systems engineer will miss
> 	something an attacker left behind.</para>
> 
>-      <para>A rootkit does do one thing usefulfor administrators: once
>+      <para>A rootkit does do one thing useful for administrators: once
> 	detected, it is a sign that a compromise happened at some
> 	point.  But, these types of applications tend to be very well
> 	hidden.  This section demonstrates a tool that can be used to
>@@ -1437,7 +1437,7 @@
> 
>       <programlisting>GSSAPIAuthentication yes</programlisting>
> 
>-      <para>After making this change, &man.sshd.8; must be restared
>+      <para>After making this change, &man.sshd.8; must be restarted
> 	for the new configuration to take effect:
> 	<command>service sshd restart</command>.</para>
>     </sect2>
>Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
>===================================================================
>--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	(revision 50829)
>+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	(working copy)
>@@ -2875,7 +2875,7 @@
> 
>       <para>The dataset is currently using 449&nbsp;GB of space (the
> 	used property).  Without compression, it would have taken
>-	496&nbsp;GB of space (the <literal>logicallyused</literal>
>+	496&nbsp;GB of space (the <literal>logicalused</literal>
> 	property).  This results in the 1.11:1 compression
> 	ratio.</para>
>

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