Attachment 27121 Details for Bug 46093 – advanced-networking.diff

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advanced-networking.diff (text/plain), 2.13 KB, created by Christian Brueffer on 2002-12-08 11:50:01 UTC

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Created: 2002-12-08 11:50:01 UTC

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>--- chapter.sgml.orig	Tue Dec  3 09:20:16 2002
>+++ chapter.sgml	Sun Dec  8 12:25:56 2002
>@@ -6236,11 +6236,12 @@
> 	  anymore since private address spaces
> 	  (<hostid role="ipaddr">10.0.0.0/8</hostid>,
> 	  <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0/24</hostid>,
>-	  etc.) and natd address translation are being employed.</para>
>+	  etc.) and Network Address Translation (<acronym>NAT</acronym>) are
>+	  being employed.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Router table entries were getting to large.  This is
>+	<para>Router table entries were getting too large.  This is
> 	  still a concern today.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </itemizedlist>
>@@ -6251,7 +6252,7 @@
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>128 bit address space.  In other words theoretically there are
> 	  340,282,366,920,938,463,463,374,607,431,768,211,456 addresses
>-	  available.  This means there are approximately.
>+	  available.  This means there are approximately
> 	  6.67 * 10^27 IPv6 addresses per square meter on our planet.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>@@ -6278,7 +6279,7 @@
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>IPSec (IP Security)</para>
>+	<para>IPsec (IP security)</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>       <listitem>
>@@ -6468,7 +6469,7 @@
>       <para>This output will differ from machine to machine.  By now you should be
> 	able to reach the IPv6 site <ulink url="http://www.kame.net">www.kame.net</ulink>
> 	and see the dancing tortoise - that is if you have a IPv6 enabled browser such as
>-	<filename role="package">mozilla+ipv6</filename>.</para>
>+	<filename role="package">mozilla</filename>.</para>
> 
>     </sect2>
> 
>@@ -6482,7 +6483,7 @@
> 	</listitem>
> 
> 	<listitem>
>-	  <para>A6records</para>
>+	  <para>A6 records</para>
> 	</listitem>
>       </itemizedlist>
> 
>@@ -6491,7 +6492,7 @@
> 
>       <programlisting>MYHOSTNAME           AAAA    MYIPv6ADDR</programlisting>
> 
>-      <para>To your primary zone DNS file.  In case you don't serve your own
>+      <para>To your primary zone DNS file.  In case you do not serve your own
> 	<acronym>DNS</acronym> zones ask your <acronym>DNS</acronym> provider.
> 	Current versions of <application>bind</application> (version 8.3 and 9)
> 	support AAAA records.</para>

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