Attachment 34411 Details for Bug 55923 – article.sgml.diff

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>--- article.sgml.orig	Sun Aug 24 14:21:53 2003
>+++ article.sgml	Sun Aug 24 15:06:27 2003
>@@ -14,19 +14,19 @@
> 
> <article>
>   <articleinfo>
>-    <title>FreeBSD on Laptops</title>
>+    <title>&os; on Laptops</title>
> 
>     <pubdate>$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.sgml,v 1.15 2003/06/20 18:02:53 blackend Exp $</pubdate>
>    
>     <abstract>
>-      <para>FreeBSD works fine on most laptops, with a few caveats.
>-        Some issues specific to running FreeBSD on laptops, relating
>+      <para>&os; works fine on most laptops, with a few caveats.
>+        Some issues specific to running &os; on laptops, relating
>         to different hardware requirements from desktops, are
>         discussed below.</para>
>     </abstract>
>   </articleinfo>
> 
>-    <para>FreeBSD is often thought of as a server operating system, but
>+    <para>&os; is often thought of as a server operating system, but
>       it works just fine on the desktop, and if you want to use it on
>       your laptop you can enjoy all the usual benefits: systematic
>       layout, easy administration and upgrading, the ports/packages
>@@ -42,7 +42,11 @@
>       part of the &os; documentation.  You might very well find some
>       information if you type the name of your laptop model and the
>       word <quote>&os;</quote> into a search engine of your
>-      choice.</para>
>+      choice.
>+      Additionally there is a &os;-specific online database which aims to
>+      give information on hardware issues with laptops, the 
>+      <ulink url="http://gerda.univie.ac.at/freebsd-laptops/">FreeBSD Laptops Compatibility List</ulink>.
>+      </para>
> 
>   <sect1>    
>     <title>XFree86</title>
>@@ -107,7 +111,7 @@
>     <title>PCMCIA (PC Card) devices</title>
> 
>     <para> Most laptops come with PCMCIA (also called PC Card)
>-      slots; these are supported fine under FreeBSD.  Look through
>+      slots; these are supported fine under &os;.  Look through
>       your boot-up messages (using &man.dmesg.8;) and see whether these were
>       detected correctly (they should appear as
>       <devicename>pccard0</devicename>,
>@@ -145,8 +149,8 @@
>       log messages about new devices being enabled.</para>
> 
>     <para>There have been major changes to the pccard code
>-      (including ISA routing of interrupts, for machines whose
>-      PCI BIOS FreeBSD can not seem to use) before the FreeBSD 4.4
>+      (including ISA routing of interrupts, for machines where
>+      &os; is not able to use the PCI BIOS) before the &os;&nbsp;4.4
>       release.  If you have problems, try upgrading your system.</para>
>  
>   </sect1> 
>@@ -156,7 +160,7 @@
>     <title>Power management</title>
> 
>     <para>Unfortunately, this is not very reliably supported under
>-      FreeBSD.  If you are lucky, some functions may work reliably;
>+      &os;.  If you are lucky, some functions may work reliably;
>       or they may not work at all.</para>
> 
>     <para>To make things a little more complex, there are two existing

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