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Created: 2004-05-17 18:50:10 UTC

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>--- share/man/man4/ng_pppoe.4.orig	Sat May  8 10:57:52 2004
>+++ share/man/man4/ng_pppoe.4	Sat May  8 11:44:39 2004
>@@ -51,7 +51,8 @@
> It is used in conjunction with the
> .Xr netgraph 4
> extensions to the Ethernet framework to divert and inject Ethernet packets
>-to and from a PPP agent (which is not specified).
>+to and from a PPP agent
>+.Pq which is not specified .
> .Pp
> The
> .Dv NGM_PPPOE_GET_STATUS
>@@ -88,25 +89,25 @@
> };
> .Ed
> .It Dv NGM_TEXT_STATUS
>-This generic message returns is a human-readable version of the node status.
>-(not yet)
>+This generic message returns a human-readable version of the node status.
>+.Pq not yet
> .It Dv NGM_PPPOE_CONNECT
>-Tell a nominated newly created hook that it's session should enter
>-the state machine in a manner to become a client.
>+Tell a nominated newly created hook that its session should enter
>+the state machine as a client.
> It must be newly created and
> a service name can be given as an argument.
>-It is legal to specify a zero length service name.
>+It is legal to specify a zero-length service name.
> This is common on some DSL setups.
> A session request packet will be broadcast on the Ethernet.
> This command uses the
> .Dv ngpppoe_init_data
> structure shown below.
> .It Dv NGM_PPPOE_LISTEN
>-Tell a nominated newly created hook that it's session should enter
>-the state machine in a manner to become a server listener.
>+Tell a nominated newly created hook that its session should enter
>+the state machine as a server listener.
> The argument
>-given is the name of the service to listen on behalf of
>-a zero length service length will match all requests for service.
>+given is the name of the service to listen for.
>+A zero-length service length will match all requests for service.
> A matching service request
> packet will be passed unmodified back to the process responsible
> for starting the service.
>@@ -116,14 +117,15 @@
> .Dv ngpppoe_init_data
> structure shown below.
> .It Dv NGM_PPPOE_OFFER
>-Tell a nominated newly created hook that it's session should enter
>-the state machine in a manner to become a server.
>+Tell a nominated newly created hook that its session should enter
>+the state machine as a server.
> The argument given is the name of the service to offer.
>-A zero length service
>+A zero-length service
> is legal.
> The State machine will progress to a state where it will await
>-a request packet to be forwarded to it from  the startup server,
>-which in turn probably received it from a LISTEN mode hook ( see above).
>+a request packet to be forwarded to it from the startup server,
>+which in turn probably received it from a LISTEN mode hook
>+.Pq see above .
> This is so
> that information that is required for the session that is embedded in
> the original session request packet, is made available to the state machine
>@@ -148,14 +150,15 @@
> This message reports successful Session negotiation.
> It uses the structure shown below, and
> reports back the hook name corresponding to the successful session.
>-.It Dv NGM_NGM_PPPOE_FAIL
>+.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_FAIL
> This command is sent to the node that started this session with one of the
> above messages, and reports a state change.
> This message reports failed Session negotiation.
> It uses the structure shown below, and
> reports back the hook name corresponding to the failed session.
>-The hook will probably have been removed immediately after sending this message
>-.It Dv NGM_NGM_PPPOE_CLOSE
>+The hook will probably have been removed immediately after sending this
>+message.
>+.It Dv NGM_PPPOE_CLOSE
> This command is sent to the node that started this session with one of the
> above messages, and reports a state change.
> This message reports a request to close a session.
>@@ -163,7 +166,9 @@
> reports back the hook name corresponding to the closed session.
> The hook will probably have been removed immediately after sending this
> message.
>-At present this message is not yet used and a 'failed' message
>+At present this message is not yet used and a
>+.Dv NGM_PPPOE_FAIL
>+message
> will be received at closure instead.
> .It Dv NGM_PPPOE_ACNAME
> This command is sent to the node that started this session with one of the

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