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>Index: preface.sgml
>===================================================================
>RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
>retrieving revision 1.23
>diff -u -r1.23 preface.sgml
>--- preface.sgml	1 Aug 2004 05:48:15 -0000	1.23
>+++ preface.sgml	24 Aug 2004 20:59:56 -0000
>@@ -8,16 +8,16 @@
>   <bridgehead id="preface-audience" renderas=sect1>Intended
>   Audience</bridgehead>
> 
>-  <para>The FreeBSD newcomer will find that the first section of this
>-    book guides the user through the FreeBSD installation process and
>+  <para>The &os; newcomer will find that the first section of this
>+    book guides the user through the &os; installation process and
>     gently introduces the concepts and conventions that underpin &unix;.
>     Working through this section requires little more than the desire
>     to explore, and the ability to take on board new concepts as they
>     are introduced.</para>
> 
>-  <para>Once you have travelled this far, the second, far larger,
>+  <para>Once you have traveled this far, the second, far larger,
>     section of the Handbook is a comprehensive reference to all manner
>-    of topics of interest to FreeBSD system administrators.  Some of
>+    of topics of interest to &os; system administrators.  Some of
>     these chapters may recommend that you do some prior reading, and
>     this is noted in the synopsis at the beginning of each
>     chapter.</para>
>@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
>   Second Edition</bridgehead>
> 
>   <para>This third edition is the culmination of over two years of
>-      work by the dedicated members of the FreeBSD Documentation
>+      work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation
>       Project.  The following are the major changes in this new
>       edition:</para>
> 
>@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
>       <listitem>
> 	<para><xref linkend="mac">, Mandatory Access Control (MAC), is
> 	  a new chapter with this edition.  It explains what MAC is
>-	  and how this mechanism can be used to secure a FreeBSD
>+	  and how this mechanism can be used to secure a &os; 
> 	  system.</para>
>       </listitem>
> 
>@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
>       <listitem>
> 	<para><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced
> 	  Networking, has been expanded with new information about
>-	  using Bluetooth devices with FreeBSD, setting up wireless
>+	  using Bluetooth devices with &os;, setting up wireless
> 	  networks, and Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM)
> 	  networking.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
>   First Edition</bridgehead>
> 
>     <para>The second edition was the culmination of over two years of
>-      work by the dedicated members of the FreeBSD Documentation
>+      work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation
>       Project.  The following were the major changes in this
>       edition:</para>
> 
>@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
> 	<quote>Appendices</quote>.</para>
>       </listitem>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para><xref linkend="install"> (<quote>Installing FreeBSD</quote>) was completely
>+	<para><xref linkend="install"> (<quote>Installing &os;</quote>) was completely
> 	rewritten with many screenshots to make it much easier for new
> 	users to grasp the text.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
> 	technologies such as <application>KDE</application> and <application>GNOME</application> on &xfree86; 4.X.</para>
>       </listitem>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para><xref linkend="boot"> (<quote>The FreeBSD Booting Process</quote>) has been
>+	<para><xref linkend="boot"> (<quote>The &os; Booting Process</quote>) has been
> 	expanded.</para>
>       </listitem>
>       <listitem>
>@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
>       </listitem>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para><xref linkend="serialcomms"> (<quote>Serial Communications</quote>) has been completely
>-	reorganized and updated for FreeBSD 4.X/5.X.</para>
>+	reorganized and updated for &os; 4.X/5.X.</para>
>       </listitem>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para><xref linkend="ppp-and-slip"> (<quote>PPP and SLIP</quote>) has been substantially
>@@ -211,11 +211,11 @@
> 
>   <para>This book is split into five logically distinct sections.
>     The first section, <emphasis>Getting Started</emphasis>, covers
>-    the installation and basic usage of FreeBSD.  It is expected that
>+    the installation and basic usage of &os;.  It is expected that
>     the reader will follow these chapters in sequence, possibly
>     skipping chapters covering familiar topics.  The second section,
>     <emphasis>Common Tasks</emphasis>, covers some frequently used
>-    features of FreeBSD.  This section, and all subsequent sections,
>+    features of &os;.  This section, and all subsequent sections,
>     can be read out of order.  Each chapter begins with a succinct
>     synopsis that
>     describes what the chapter covers and what the reader is expected
>@@ -234,8 +234,8 @@
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="introduction">, Introduction</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user.  It describes the
>-	history of the FreeBSD Project, its goals and development model.</para>
>+	<para>Introduces &os; to a new user.  It describes the
>+	history of the &os; Project, its goals and development model.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="basics">, &unix; Basics</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Covers the basic commands and functionality of the
>-	FreeBSD operating system.  If you are familiar with Linux or
>+	&os; operating system.  If you are familiar with Linux or
> 	another flavor of &unix; then you can probably skip this
> 	chapter.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="ports">, Installing Applications</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Covers the installation of third-party software with
>-	both FreeBSD's innovative <quote>Ports Collection</quote> and standard
>+	both &os;'s innovative <quote>Ports Collection</quote> and standard
> 	binary packages.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="x11">, The X Window System</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Describes the X Window System in general and using
>-	<application>&xfree86;</application> on FreeBSD in particular.  Also describes common
>+	<application>&xfree86;</application> on &os; in particular.  Also describes common
> 	desktop environments such as <application>KDE</application> and <application>GNOME</application>.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@
>       <listitem>
>         <para>Lists some common desktop applications, such as web browsers
>          and productivity suites, and describes how to install them on
>-         FreeBSD.</para>
>+         &os;.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>-      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="kernelconfig">, Configuring the FreeBSD
>+      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="kernelconfig">, Configuring the &os; 
>       Kernel</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Explains why you might need to configure a new kernel
>@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="printing">, Printing</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Describes managing printers on FreeBSD, including
>+	<para>Describes managing printers on &os;, including
> 	information about banner pages, printer accounting, and
> 	initial setup.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -309,9 +309,9 @@
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="linuxemu">, Linux Binary Compatibility</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Describes the Linux compatibility features of FreeBSD.
>+	<para>Describes the Linux compatibility features of &os;.
> 	Also provides detailed installation instructions for many
>-	popular Linux applications such as <application>&oracle;</application>, <application>&sap.r3;</application>, and
>+	popular &linux; applications such as <application>&oracle;</application>, <application>&sap.r3;</application>, and
> 	  <application>&mathematica;</application>.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>@@ -322,15 +322,15 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="config-tuning">, Configuration and Tuning</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Describes the parameters available for system
>-	administrators to tune a FreeBSD system for optimum
>+	administrators to tune a &os; system for optimum
> 	performance.  Also describes the various configuration files
>-	used in FreeBSD and where to find them.</para>
>+	used in &os; and where to find them.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="boot">, Booting Process</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Describes the FreeBSD boot process and explains
>+	<para>Describes the &os; boot process and explains
> 	how to control this process with configuration options.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="security">, Security</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Describes many different tools available to help keep your
>-	FreeBSD system secure, including Kerberos, IPsec, OpenSSH, and
>+	&os; system secure, including Kerberos, IPsec, OpenSSH, and
> 	network firewalls.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>@@ -355,14 +355,14 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="mac">, Mandatory Access Control</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Explains what Mandatory Access Control (MAC) is and how this
>-	mechanism can be used to secure a FreeBSD system.</para>
>+	mechanism can be used to secure a &os; system.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="disks">, Storage</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Describes how to manage storage media and filesystems
>-  	  with FreeBSD.  This includes physical disks, RAID arrays,
>+  	  with &os;.  This includes physical disks, RAID arrays,
>   	  optical and tape media, memory-backed disks, and network
>   	  filesystems.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="l10n">, Localization</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Describes how to use FreeBSD in languages other than
>+	<para>Describes how to use &os; in languages other than
> 	English.  Covers both system and application level
> 	localization.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -386,8 +386,8 @@
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="cutting-edge">, The Cutting Edge</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Explains the differences between FreeBSD-STABLE,
>-	FreeBSD-CURRENT, and FreeBSD releases.  Describes which users
>+	<para>Explains the differences between &os.stable;,
>+	&os.current;, and &os; releases.  Describes which users
> 	would benefit from tracking a development system and outlines
> 	that process.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -399,14 +399,14 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="serialcomms">, Serial Communications</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Explains how to connect terminals and modems to your
>-  	FreeBSD system for both dial in and dial out connections.</para>
>+  	&os; system for both dial in and dial out connections.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="ppp-and-slip">, PPP and SLIP</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Describes how to use PPP, SLIP, or PPP over Ethernet to
>-	connect to remote systems with FreeBSD.</para>
>+	connect to remote systems with &os;.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="network-servers">, Network Servers</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
> 	<para>Provides detailed instructions and example configuration
>-	  files to set up your FreeBSD machine as a network filesystem
>+	  files to set up your &os; machine as a network filesystem
> 	  server, domain name server, network information system
> 	  server, or time synchronization server.</para>
>       </listitem>
>@@ -440,11 +440,11 @@
> 
> 
>     <varlistentry>
>-      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="mirrors">, Obtaining FreeBSD </emphasis></term>
>+      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="mirrors">, Obtaining &os;</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Lists different sources for obtaining FreeBSD media on CDROM
>+	<para>Lists different sources for obtaining &os; media on CDROM
> 	or DVD as well as different sites on the Internet that allow
>-	you to download and install FreeBSD.</para>
>+	you to download and install &os;.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>@@ -459,15 +459,15 @@
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="eresources">, Resources on the Internet</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Describes the many forums available for FreeBSD users to
>+	<para>Describes the many forums available for &os; users to
> 	post questions and engage in technical conversations about
>-	FreeBSD.</para>
>+	&os;.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>     <varlistentry>
>       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="pgpkeys">, PGP Keys</emphasis></term>
>       <listitem>
>-	<para>Lists the PGP fingerprints of several FreeBSD Developers.</para>
>+	<para>Lists the PGP fingerprints of several &os; Developers.</para>
>       </listitem>
>     </varlistentry>
>   </variablelist>
>@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@
>   </para>
> 
>   <para>Meaning the user should type the <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>,
>-    <keycap>Alt</keycap>,and <keycap>Del</keycap> keys at the same
>+    <keycap>Alt</keycap>, and <keycap>Del</keycap> keys at the same
>     time.</para>
> 
>   <para>Keys that are meant to be typed in sequence will be separated with
>@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@
>   <screen><prompt>E:\&gt;</prompt> <userinput>tools\fdimage floppies\kern.flp A:</userinput></screen>
> 
>   <para>Examples starting with &prompt.root; indicate a command that
>-    must be invoked as the superuser in FreeBSD.  You can login as
>+    must be invoked as the superuser in &os;.  You can login as
>     <username>root</username> to type the command, or login as your
>     normal account and use &man.su.1; to gain
>     superuser privileges.</para>
>@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@
>     document by paying authors to work on it full-time, paying for
>     publication, etc.  In particular, BSDi (subsequently acquired by
>     <ulink url="http://www.windriver.com">Wind River Systems</ulink>)
>-    paid members of the FreeBSD Documentation Project to work on
>+    paid members of the &os; Documentation Project to work on
>     improving this book full time leading up to the publication of the
>     first printed edition in March 2000 (ISBN 1-57176-241-8).  Wind
>     River Systems then paid several additional authors to make a

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