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Bug 70920
[PATCH] fix couple typos && s/words/entities (handbook preface)
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preface.diff
preface.diff (text/plain), 14.48 KB, created by
Jesus R.Camou
on 2004-08-24 22:20:15 UTC
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>Index: preface.sgml >=================================================================== >RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v >retrieving revision 1.23 >diff -u -r1.23 preface.sgml >--- preface.sgml 1 Aug 2004 05:48:15 -0000 1.23 >+++ preface.sgml 24 Aug 2004 20:59:56 -0000 >@@ -8,16 +8,16 @@ > <bridgehead id="preface-audience" renderas=sect1>Intended > Audience</bridgehead> > >- <para>The FreeBSD newcomer will find that the first section of this >- book guides the user through the FreeBSD installation process and >+ <para>The &os; newcomer will find that the first section of this >+ book guides the user through the &os; installation process and > gently introduces the concepts and conventions that underpin &unix;. > Working through this section requires little more than the desire > to explore, and the ability to take on board new concepts as they > are introduced.</para> > >- <para>Once you have travelled this far, the second, far larger, >+ <para>Once you have traveled this far, the second, far larger, > section of the Handbook is a comprehensive reference to all manner >- of topics of interest to FreeBSD system administrators. Some of >+ of topics of interest to &os; system administrators. Some of > these chapters may recommend that you do some prior reading, and > this is noted in the synopsis at the beginning of each > chapter.</para> >@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ > Second Edition</bridgehead> > > <para>This third edition is the culmination of over two years of >- work by the dedicated members of the FreeBSD Documentation >+ work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation > Project. The following are the major changes in this new > edition:</para> > >@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ > <listitem> > <para><xref linkend="mac">, Mandatory Access Control (MAC), is > a new chapter with this edition. It explains what MAC is >- and how this mechanism can be used to secure a FreeBSD >+ and how this mechanism can be used to secure a &os; > system.</para> > </listitem> > >@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ > <listitem> > <para><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced > Networking, has been expanded with new information about >- using Bluetooth devices with FreeBSD, setting up wireless >+ using Bluetooth devices with &os;, setting up wireless > networks, and Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM) > networking.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ > First Edition</bridgehead> > > <para>The second edition was the culmination of over two years of >- work by the dedicated members of the FreeBSD Documentation >+ work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation > Project. The following were the major changes in this > edition:</para> > >@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ > <quote>Appendices</quote>.</para> > </listitem> > <listitem> >- <para><xref linkend="install"> (<quote>Installing FreeBSD</quote>) was completely >+ <para><xref linkend="install"> (<quote>Installing &os;</quote>) was completely > rewritten with many screenshots to make it much easier for new > users to grasp the text.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ > technologies such as <application>KDE</application> and <application>GNOME</application> on &xfree86; 4.X.</para> > </listitem> > <listitem> >- <para><xref linkend="boot"> (<quote>The FreeBSD Booting Process</quote>) has been >+ <para><xref linkend="boot"> (<quote>The &os; Booting Process</quote>) has been > expanded.</para> > </listitem> > <listitem> >@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ > </listitem> > <listitem> > <para><xref linkend="serialcomms"> (<quote>Serial Communications</quote>) has been completely >- reorganized and updated for FreeBSD 4.X/5.X.</para> >+ reorganized and updated for &os; 4.X/5.X.</para> > </listitem> > <listitem> > <para><xref linkend="ppp-and-slip"> (<quote>PPP and SLIP</quote>) has been substantially >@@ -211,11 +211,11 @@ > > <para>This book is split into five logically distinct sections. > The first section, <emphasis>Getting Started</emphasis>, covers >- the installation and basic usage of FreeBSD. It is expected that >+ the installation and basic usage of &os;. It is expected that > the reader will follow these chapters in sequence, possibly > skipping chapters covering familiar topics. The second section, > <emphasis>Common Tasks</emphasis>, covers some frequently used >- features of FreeBSD. This section, and all subsequent sections, >+ features of &os;. This section, and all subsequent sections, > can be read out of order. Each chapter begins with a succinct > synopsis that > describes what the chapter covers and what the reader is expected >@@ -234,8 +234,8 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="introduction">, Introduction</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the >- history of the FreeBSD Project, its goals and development model.</para> >+ <para>Introduces &os; to a new user. It describes the >+ history of the &os; Project, its goals and development model.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> >@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="basics">, &unix; Basics</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Covers the basic commands and functionality of the >- FreeBSD operating system. If you are familiar with Linux or >+ &os; operating system. If you are familiar with Linux or > another flavor of &unix; then you can probably skip this > chapter.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="ports">, Installing Applications</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Covers the installation of third-party software with >- both FreeBSD's innovative <quote>Ports Collection</quote> and standard >+ both &os;'s innovative <quote>Ports Collection</quote> and standard > binary packages.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> >@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="x11">, The X Window System</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Describes the X Window System in general and using >- <application>&xfree86;</application> on FreeBSD in particular. Also describes common >+ <application>&xfree86;</application> on &os; in particular. Also describes common > desktop environments such as <application>KDE</application> and <application>GNOME</application>.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> >@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ > <listitem> > <para>Lists some common desktop applications, such as web browsers > and productivity suites, and describes how to install them on >- FreeBSD.</para> >+ &os;.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> >@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> >- <term><emphasis><xref linkend="kernelconfig">, Configuring the FreeBSD >+ <term><emphasis><xref linkend="kernelconfig">, Configuring the &os; > Kernel</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Explains why you might need to configure a new kernel >@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="printing">, Printing</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Describes managing printers on FreeBSD, including >+ <para>Describes managing printers on &os;, including > information about banner pages, printer accounting, and > initial setup.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -309,9 +309,9 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="linuxemu">, Linux Binary Compatibility</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Describes the Linux compatibility features of FreeBSD. >+ <para>Describes the Linux compatibility features of &os;. > Also provides detailed installation instructions for many >- popular Linux applications such as <application>&oracle;</application>, <application>&sap.r3;</application>, and >+ popular &linux; applications such as <application>&oracle;</application>, <application>&sap.r3;</application>, and > <application>&mathematica;</application>.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> >@@ -322,15 +322,15 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="config-tuning">, Configuration and Tuning</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Describes the parameters available for system >- administrators to tune a FreeBSD system for optimum >+ administrators to tune a &os; system for optimum > performance. Also describes the various configuration files >- used in FreeBSD and where to find them.</para> >+ used in &os; and where to find them.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="boot">, Booting Process</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Describes the FreeBSD boot process and explains >+ <para>Describes the &os; boot process and explains > how to control this process with configuration options.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> >@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="security">, Security</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Describes many different tools available to help keep your >- FreeBSD system secure, including Kerberos, IPsec, OpenSSH, and >+ &os; system secure, including Kerberos, IPsec, OpenSSH, and > network firewalls.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> >@@ -355,14 +355,14 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="mac">, Mandatory Access Control</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Explains what Mandatory Access Control (MAC) is and how this >- mechanism can be used to secure a FreeBSD system.</para> >+ mechanism can be used to secure a &os; system.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="disks">, Storage</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Describes how to manage storage media and filesystems >- with FreeBSD. This includes physical disks, RAID arrays, >+ with &os;. This includes physical disks, RAID arrays, > optical and tape media, memory-backed disks, and network > filesystems.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="l10n">, Localization</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Describes how to use FreeBSD in languages other than >+ <para>Describes how to use &os; in languages other than > English. Covers both system and application level > localization.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -386,8 +386,8 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="cutting-edge">, The Cutting Edge</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Explains the differences between FreeBSD-STABLE, >- FreeBSD-CURRENT, and FreeBSD releases. Describes which users >+ <para>Explains the differences between &os.stable;, >+ &os.current;, and &os; releases. Describes which users > would benefit from tracking a development system and outlines > that process.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -399,14 +399,14 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="serialcomms">, Serial Communications</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Explains how to connect terminals and modems to your >- FreeBSD system for both dial in and dial out connections.</para> >+ &os; system for both dial in and dial out connections.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="ppp-and-slip">, PPP and SLIP</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Describes how to use PPP, SLIP, or PPP over Ethernet to >- connect to remote systems with FreeBSD.</para> >+ connect to remote systems with &os;.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> >@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="network-servers">, Network Servers</emphasis></term> > <listitem> > <para>Provides detailed instructions and example configuration >- files to set up your FreeBSD machine as a network filesystem >+ files to set up your &os; machine as a network filesystem > server, domain name server, network information system > server, or time synchronization server.</para> > </listitem> >@@ -440,11 +440,11 @@ > <!-- Part V - Appendices --> > > <varlistentry> >- <term><emphasis><xref linkend="mirrors">, Obtaining FreeBSD </emphasis></term> >+ <term><emphasis><xref linkend="mirrors">, Obtaining &os;</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Lists different sources for obtaining FreeBSD media on CDROM >+ <para>Lists different sources for obtaining &os; media on CDROM > or DVD as well as different sites on the Internet that allow >- you to download and install FreeBSD.</para> >+ you to download and install &os;.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> >@@ -459,15 +459,15 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="eresources">, Resources on the Internet</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Describes the many forums available for FreeBSD users to >+ <para>Describes the many forums available for &os; users to > post questions and engage in technical conversations about >- FreeBSD.</para> >+ &os;.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > <varlistentry> > <term><emphasis><xref linkend="pgpkeys">, PGP Keys</emphasis></term> > <listitem> >- <para>Lists the PGP fingerprints of several FreeBSD Developers.</para> >+ <para>Lists the PGP fingerprints of several &os; Developers.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > </variablelist> >@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ > </para> > > <para>Meaning the user should type the <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>, >- <keycap>Alt</keycap>,and <keycap>Del</keycap> keys at the same >+ <keycap>Alt</keycap>, and <keycap>Del</keycap> keys at the same > time.</para> > > <para>Keys that are meant to be typed in sequence will be separated with >@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ > <screen><prompt>E:\></prompt> <userinput>tools\fdimage floppies\kern.flp A:</userinput></screen> > > <para>Examples starting with &prompt.root; indicate a command that >- must be invoked as the superuser in FreeBSD. You can login as >+ must be invoked as the superuser in &os;. You can login as > <username>root</username> to type the command, or login as your > normal account and use &man.su.1; to gain > superuser privileges.</para> >@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ > document by paying authors to work on it full-time, paying for > publication, etc. In particular, BSDi (subsequently acquired by > <ulink url="http://www.windriver.com">Wind River Systems</ulink>) >- paid members of the FreeBSD Documentation Project to work on >+ paid members of the &os; Documentation Project to work on > improving this book full time leading up to the publication of the > first printed edition in March 2000 (ISBN 1-57176-241-8). Wind > River Systems then paid several additional authors to make a
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