Attachment 47266 Details for Bug 72462 – hub.diff

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hub.diff (text/plain), 2.62 KB, created by Joel Dahl on 2004-10-09 12:00:40 UTC

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>--- article.sgml	Sat Oct  2 18:25:55 2004
>+++ new.article.sgml	Sat Oct  9 12:27:48 2004
>@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@
>           FTP distributions. FTP access must be
>           anonymous, and no upload/download ratios
>           are allowed (a ridiculous thing anyway).
>-          Upload capability is not required (and <emphasis>must</emphasis>
>-          never be allowed for the FreeBSD file space).
>+          Upload capability is not required (and <emphasis>must never</emphasis>
>+          be allowed for the FreeBSD file space).
>           Also the FreeBSD archive should be available under
>           the path <filename>/pub/FreeBSD</filename>.
>         </para>
>@@ -666,28 +666,25 @@
>          environment variables, like
>          <literal>SGML_CATALOG_FILES</literal>.
>          Also have a look at your <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>
>-         (copy <filename>/etc/defaults/make.conf</filename> if
>+         (copy <filename>/usr/share/examples/etc/make.conf</filename> if
>          you do not have one), and look at the
>          <literal>DOC_LANG</literal> variable.
>          Now you are probably ready to run <command>make</command>
>-         in you doc directory (<filename>/usr/share/doc</filename>
>+         in your doc directory (<filename>/usr/share/doc</filename>
>          by default) and build the documentation.
>          Again you need to make it accessible for your web server
>          and make sure the links point to the right location.
>          <important>
>            <para>
>              The building of the documentation, as well as lots
>-             of side issues, is documented itself in:
>+             of side issues, is documented itself in the
>              <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/">fdp-primer</ulink>.
>              Please read this piece of documentation, especially if you
>              have problems building the documentation.
>            </para>
>          </important>
>-         <note>
>-           <para>
>-           XXX MAYBE THIS CAN BE LINKED FROM WITHIN - NOT USING AN ABSOLUTE URL XXX
>-           </para>
>-         </note>
>+          
>        </para>
>      </sect3>
>    </sect2>
>@@ -845,7 +842,7 @@
>         </procedure>
>       </sect3>
>       <sect3 id="mirror-where-official">
>-        <title>I'm an official mirror, what is the right site for me?</title>
>+        <title>I am an official mirror, what is the right site for me?</title>
>         <para>
>           In general the description in <xref linkend="mirror-where-simple">
>           still applies. Of course you may want to put some

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