Attachment 56264 Details for Bug 84951 – linux-comparison-article.sgml.01.diff

[patch] linux-comparison-article.sgml.01.diff

linux-comparison-article.sgml.01.diff (text/plain), 1.16 KB, created by David Adam on 2005-08-15 15:00:37 UTC

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>Index: article.sgml
>===================================================================
>RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-comparison/article.sgml,v
>retrieving revision 1.5
>diff -u -r1.5 article.sgml
>--- article.sgml	8 Aug 2005 22:08:06 -0000	1.5
>+++ article.sgml	15 Aug 2005 13:37:44 -0000
>@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@
> 
>       <listitem><para>One of the problems associated with Open Source
>         software is the sheer volume of available applications. There
>-        are literally 10s of 1000s of Open Source application projects
>+        are literally tens of thousands of Open Source application projects
>         each with varying levels of responsiveness to security
>         incidents. FreeBSD has met this challenge head-on with <ulink
>         url="http://www.vuxml.org/freebsd/">VuXML</ulink>. All software
>@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@
>           site: <ulink
>           url="http://www.freebsd.org/commercial/"></ulink></para></listitem>
> 
>-	<listitem><para>FreeBSDMall has been selling support contracts
>+	<listitem><para>FreeBSDMall, who have been selling support contracts
> 	  for nearly 10 years.
> 	  <ulink url="http://www.freebsdmall.com"></ulink></para></listitem>

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