FreeBSD Bugzilla – Attachment 79560 Details for
Bug 114272
minor grammar fixes and more to handbook/ports chapter
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on 2007-07-04 00:30:03 UTC
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>--- chapter.sgml.orig 2007-07-03 18:10:53.000000000 -0500 >+++ chapter.sgml 2007-07-03 17:13:58.000000000 -0500 >@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ > part of the base system. However, there is only so much one can > do before needing to install an additional third-party > application to get real work done. FreeBSD provides two >- complementary technologies for installing third party software >+ complementary technologies for installing third-party software > on your system: the FreeBSD Ports Collection (for installing from > source), and packages (for installing from pre-built binaries). > Either method may be used to install the >@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ > <title>Overview of Software Installation</title> > > <para>If you have used a &unix; system before you will know that >- the typical procedure for installing third party software goes >+ the typical procedure for installing third-party software goes > something like this:</para> > > <procedure> >@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ > <quote>traditional</quote> way with FreeBSD. However, FreeBSD > provides two technologies which can save you a lot of effort: > packages and ports. At the time of writing, over &os.numports; >- third party applications have been made available in this >+ third-party applications have been made available in this > way.</para> > > <para>For any given application, the FreeBSD package for that >@@ -174,11 +174,11 @@ > because they have to run on the maximum number of systems. By > installing from the port, you can tweak the compilation options to > (for example) generate code that is specific to a Pentium >- IV or Athlon processor.</para> >+ 4 or Athlon processor.</para> > </listitem> > > <listitem> >- <para>Some applications have compile time options relating to >+ <para>Some applications have compile-time options relating to > what they can and cannot do. For example, > <application>Apache</application> can be configured with a > wide variety of different built-in options. By building >@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ > whether or not you have installed an X11 server. This sort > of rough tweaking is possible with packages, but rapidly > becomes impossible if an application has more than one or >- two different compile time options.</para> >+ two different compile-time options.</para> > </listitem> > > <listitem> >@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ > </warning> > > <para>The remainder of this chapter will explain how to use >- packages and ports to install and manage third party software on >+ packages and ports to install and manage third-party software on > FreeBSD.</para> > </sect1> > >@@ -414,8 +414,8 @@ > <para>The example above would download the correct package and > add it without any further user intervention. > If you want to specify an alternative &os; Packages Mirror, >- instead of the main distribution site, you have to set >- <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar> accordingly, to >+ instead of the main distribution site, you have to set the >+ <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar> environment variable accordingly, to > override the default settings. &man.pkg.add.1; > uses &man.fetch.3; to download the files, which honors various > environment variables, including >@@ -436,8 +436,8 @@ > &os.stable;. If you run a -RELEASE version, it will grab > the version of the package that was built with your > release. It is possible to change this behavior by >- overriding the <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar> environment >- variable. For example, if you run a &os; 5.4-RELEASE >+ overriding <envar>PACKAGESITE</envar>. >+ For example, if you run a &os; 5.4-RELEASE > system, by default &man.pkg.add.1; will try to fetch > packages from > <literal>ftp://ftp.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/i386/packages-5.4-release/Latest/</literal>. >@@ -553,6 +553,13 @@ > </para> > > <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_delete <replaceable>xchat-1.7.1</replaceable></userinput></screen> >+ >+ <para>Note that &man.pkg.delete.1; requires the full package name >+ and number; the above command would not work if >+ <literal>xchat</literal> was given instead of >+ <literal>xchat-1.7.1</literal>. It is, however, easy to use >+ &man.pkg.version.1; to find the version of the installed package. >+ </para> > </sect2> > > <sect2> >@@ -817,9 +824,10 @@ > <listitem> > <para>A <filename>distinfo</filename> file. This file > contains information about the files that must be >- downloaded to build the port and their checksums, to >+ downloaded to build the port, and their checksums >+ (using &man.md5.1; and &man.sha256.1;), to > verify that files have not been corrupted during the >- download using &man.md5.1;.</para> >+ download.</para> > </listitem> > > <listitem> >@@ -985,7 +993,7 @@ > documentation for your shell for more information.</para> > </note> > >- <para>Some third party DVD-ROM products such as the FreeBSD Toolkit >+ <para>Some third-party DVD-ROM products such as the FreeBSD Toolkit > from the <ulink url="http://www.freebsdmall.com/">FreeBSD > Mall</ulink> contain distfiles. They can be used with the Ports > Collection. Mount the DVD-ROM on <filename>/cdrom</filename>. If
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