Attachment 79604 Details for Bug 114337 – file.diff

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>--- chapter.sgml.orig	2007-07-03 18:27:06.000000000 -0500
>+++ chapter.sgml	2007-07-05 12:59:42.000000000 -0500
>@@ -26,9 +26,10 @@
> 
>     <para>FreeBSD uses X11 to provide users with
>       a powerful graphical user interface.  X11
>-      is an open-source implementation of the X Window System that
>-      includes both <application>&xorg;</application> and
>-      <application>&xfree86;</application>.  &os; versions up to and
>+      is a freely available version of the X Window System that
>+      is implemented in both <application>&xorg;</application> and
>+      <application>&xfree86;</application> (and other software
>+      packages not discussed here).  &os; versions up to and
>       including &os;&nbsp;5.2.1-RELEASE
>       will find the default installation to be
>       <application>&xfree86;</application>, the X11 server released by
>@@ -1144,7 +1145,7 @@
>         <title>Xaccess</title>
> 
>         <para>The protocol for connecting to
>-          <application>XDM</application> controlled displays is called
>+          <application>XDM</application>-controlled displays is called
>           the X Display Manager Connection Protocol (XDMCP).  This file
>           is a ruleset for controlling XDMCP connections from remote
> 	  machines.  It is ignored unless the <filename>xdm-config</filename>
>@@ -1155,7 +1156,7 @@
>       <sect3>
>         <title>Xresources</title>
>         <para>This is an application-defaults file for the display
>-          chooser and the login screens.  This is where the appearance
>+          chooser and login screens.  In it, the appearance
>           of the login program can be modified.  The format is identical
>           to the app-defaults file described in the
> 	  X11 documentation.</para>
>@@ -1210,7 +1211,7 @@
>       <title>Running a Network Display Server</title>
> 
>       <para>In order for other clients to connect to the display
>-        server, edit the access control rules, and enable the connection
>+        server, you must edit the access control rules and enable the connection
>         listener.  By default these are set to conservative values.
>         To make <application>XDM</application> listen for connections,
>         first comment out a line in the <filename>xdm-config</filename>
>@@ -1223,9 +1224,9 @@
>       <para>and then restart <application>XDM</application>.  Remember that
>         comments in app-defaults files begin with a <quote>!</quote>
>         character, not the usual <quote>#</quote>.  More strict
>-        access controls may be desired.  Look at the example
>+        access controls may be desired &mdash; look at the example
>         entries in <filename>Xaccess</filename>, and refer to the
>-        &man.xdm.1; manual page.</para>
>+        &man.xdm.1; manual page for further information.</para>
>     </sect2>
> 
>      <sect2>
>@@ -1428,7 +1429,7 @@
> 	  </listitem>
> 
>           <listitem>
>-	    <para>Centralized consisted dialog driven desktop
>+	    <para>Centralized, consistent, dialog-driven desktop
> 	      configuration</para>
> 	  </listitem>
> 
>@@ -1439,13 +1440,13 @@
>         </itemizedlist>
> 
>         <para><application>KDE</application> comes with a web browser called
>-          <application>Konqueror</application>, which represents
>+          <application>Konqueror</application>, which is
>           a solid competitor to other existing web browsers on &unix;
>           systems.  More information on <application>KDE</application>
>           can be found on the <ulink url="http://www.kde.org/">KDE
>           website</ulink>.  For FreeBSD specific information and
> 	  resources on <application>KDE</application>, consult
>-	  the <ulink url="http://freebsd.kde.org/">FreeBSD-KDE
>+	  the <ulink url="http://freebsd.kde.org/">FreeBSD KDE
> 	  team</ulink>'s website.</para>
>       </sect3>
> 
>@@ -1554,7 +1555,7 @@
> 
>            <listitem>
> 	     <para>Fully configurable via mouse, with drag and
>-               drop, etc </para>
>+               drop, etc. </para>
>            </listitem>
> 
>            <listitem>
>@@ -1564,8 +1565,7 @@
> 
>            <listitem>
> 	     <para>Integrated window manager, file manager, sound manager,
>-	       <application>GNOME</application> compliance module, and other
>-	       things</para>
>+	       <application>GNOME</application> compliance module, and more</para>
>            </listitem>
> 
>            <listitem>

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