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>--- chapter.sgml.orig	2007-07-05 13:56:31.000000000 -0500
>+++ chapter.sgml	2007-07-06 12:54:55.000000000 -0500
>@@ -178,22 +178,22 @@
>       </indexterm>
> 
>       <para><application>Mozilla</application> is a modern,
>-        stable browser that is fully ported to FreeBSD.  It features a very
>-        standards-compliant HTML display engine.  It provides a mail
>+        stable browser that is fully ported to FreeBSD: it features a very
>+        standards-compliant HTML display engine; it provides a mail
>         and news reader.  It even has a HTML composer if you plan to
>         write some web pages yourself.  Users of
>         <application>&netscape;</application> will recognize the
>-        similarities with <application>Communicator</application>
>-        suite, as both browsers shared the same basis.</para>
>+        similarities with the <application>Communicator</application>
>+        suite, as both browsers share some development history.</para>
> 
>       <para>On slow machines, with a CPU speed less than 233MHz or
>         with less than 64MB of RAM, <application>Mozilla</application>
>-        can be too resource-consuming to be fully usable.  You may
>+        can be too resource-demanding to be fully usable.  You may
>         want to look at the <application>Opera</application> browser
>         instead, described a little later in this chapter.</para>
> 
>       <para>If you cannot or do not want to compile
>-        <application>Mozilla</application> for any reason, the FreeBSD
>+        <application>Mozilla</application>, for whatever reason, the FreeBSD
>         GNOME team has already done this for you.  Just install the
>         package from the network by:</para>
> 
>@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@
>       <title>Firefox, Mozilla and &java; plugin</title>
> 
>       <note>
>-	<para>In this section and in the next one, we assume you
>+	<para>In this section and in the next one, we assume you have
> 	  already installed <application>Firefox</application> or
> 	  <application>Mozilla</application>.</para>
>       </note>
>@@ -270,8 +270,8 @@
> 
>       <para>To add &java; support to
> 	<application>Firefox</application> or
>-	<application>Mozilla</application>, you have to install, at
>-	first, the <filename
>+	<application>Mozilla</application>, you first have to install
>+	the <filename
> 	role="package">java/javavmwrapper</filename> port.  Then,
> 	download the <application>Diablo &jre;</application> package
> 	from <ulink
>@@ -280,9 +280,9 @@
> 
>       <para>Start your browser, enter
> 	<literal>about:plugins</literal> in the location bar and press
>-	<keycap>Enter</keycap>.  A page regarding installed plugins
>-	will be displayed, the <application>&java;</application>
>-	plugin should be listed there now.  If it is not the case, as
>+	<keycap>Enter</keycap>.  A page listing the installed plugins
>+	will be displayed; the <application>&java;</application>
>+	plugin should be listed there now.  If it is not, as
> 	<username>root</username>, run the following command:</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ln -s /usr/local/diablo-jre1.5.0/plugin/i386/ns7/libjavaplugin_oji.so \
>@@ -356,9 +356,9 @@
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r opera</userinput></screen>
> 
>-      <para>Some FTP sites do not have all the packages, but the same
>-        result can be obtained with the Ports Collection by
>-        typing:</para>
>+      <para>Some FTP sites do not have all the packages, but
>+        <application>Opera</application> can still be obtained
>+        through the Ports Collection by typing:</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/www/opera</userinput>
> &prompt.root; <userinput>make install clean</userinput></screen>
>@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@
> 	version is useful in situations requiring the use of plug-ins
> 	that are only available for Linux, such as <application>Adobe
> 	&acrobat.reader;</application>.  In all other respects, the
>-	FreeBSD and Linux versions appear to be functionally
>+	FreeBSD and Linux versions should be functionally
> 	identical.</para>
> 
>     </sect2>
>@@ -388,10 +388,14 @@
> 	<application>Konqueror</application> is much more than a browser,
> 	it is also a file manager and a multimedia viewer.</para>
> 
>-      <para><application>Konqueror</application> also comes with a set of plugins,
>+      <para>There is also a set of plugins available for
>+        <application>Konqueror</application>,
> 	available in <filename role="package">misc/konq-plugins</filename>.</para>
> 
>-      <para><application>Konqueror</application> also supports <application>&flash;</application> and a How To
>+      <para><application>Konqueror</application> also supports
>+         <application>&flash;</application>; a <quote>How To</quote> guide
>+        for getting <application>&flash;</application> support on
>+        <application>Konqueror</application>
> 	is available at <ulink url="http://freebsd.kde.org/howto.php"></ulink>.</para>
>     </sect2>
>   </sect1>
>@@ -403,7 +407,8 @@
>        good office suite or a friendly word processor.  While some
>        <link linkend="x11-wm">desktop environments</link> like
>        <application>KDE</application> already provide an office suite,
>-       there is no default application.  FreeBSD provides all that is
>+       there is no default productivity package.
>+       FreeBSD can provide all that is
>        needed, regardless of your desktop environment.</para>
> 
>     <para>This section covers these applications:</para>
>@@ -503,7 +508,7 @@
> 
>       <para><application>AbiWord</application> can import or export
>         many file formats, including some proprietary ones like
>-        Microsoft <filename>.doc</filename>.</para>
>+        &microsoft;'s <filename>.doc</filename>.</para>
> 
>       <para><application>AbiWord</application> is available as a
>         package.  You can install it by:</para>
>@@ -578,7 +583,8 @@
>         and a drawing program.  Its user interface is very similar
>         to other office suites, and it can import and export in various
>         popular file formats.  It is available in a number of
>-        different languages including interfaces, spell checkers, and
>+        different languages &emdash; internationalization has been
>+        extended to interfaces, spell checkers, and
>         dictionaries.</para>
> 
>       <para>The word processor of
>@@ -593,7 +599,7 @@
>         can be found on the
> 	<ulink url="http://www.openoffice.org/">OpenOffice.org web site</ulink>.
> 	For FreeBSD specific information, and to directly
>-	download packages use the <ulink
>+	download packages, use the <ulink
> 	url="http://porting.openoffice.org/freebsd/">FreeBSD OpenOffice.org
> 	Porting Team</ulink>'s web site.</para>
> 
>@@ -656,9 +662,10 @@
>   <sect1 id="desktop-viewers">
>     <title>Document Viewers</title>
> 
>-    <para>Some new document formats have recently gained popularity.
>-      The standard viewers they require may not be available in the
>-      base system.  We will see how to install them in this
>+    <para>Some new document formats have gained popularity since
>+      the advent of &unix;;
>+      the standard viewers they require may not be available in the
>+      base system.  We will see how to install such viewers in this
>       section.</para>
> 
>     <para>This section covers these applications:</para>
>@@ -751,9 +758,9 @@
>         viewer.  It is originally based on
>         <application>ghostview</application> but it has a nicer look
>         thanks to the <application>Xaw3d</application> library.  It is fast and its interface is
>-        clean.  <application>gv</application> has many features like
>-        orientation, paper size, scale, or antialias.  Almost any
>-        operation can be done either from the keyboard or the
>+        clean.  <application>gv</application> has many features, such as
>+        orientation, paper size, scale, and anti-aliasing.  Almost any
>+        operation can be done with either the keyboard or the
>         mouse.</para>
> 
>       <para>To install <application>gv</application> as a package,
>@@ -832,11 +839,11 @@
> 
>     <para>If, for any reason, you would like to manage your personal
>       finances on your FreeBSD Desktop, there are some powerful and
>-      easy to use applications ready to be installed.  Some of them
>-      are compatible with widespread file formats like those of
>-      <application><trademark class="registered">Quicken</trademark></application> or <application>Excel</application> documents.</para>
>+      easy-to-use applications ready to be installed.  Some of them
>+      are compatible with widespread file formats, such as the formats used by
>+      <application><trademark class="registered">Quicken</trademark></application> and <application>Excel</application> to store documents.</para>
> 
>-    <para>This section covers these applications:</para>
>+    <para>This section covers these programs:</para>
>      
>     <informaltable frame="none" pgwide="1">
>       <tgroup cols="4">
>@@ -882,14 +889,14 @@
> 
>       <para><application>GnuCash</application> is part of the
>         <application>GNOME</application> effort to provide
>-        user-friendly yet powerful applications to end-users.  With
>+        user-friendly, yet powerful, applications to end-users.  With
>         <application>GnuCash</application>, you can keep track of your
>-        income and expenses, your bank accounts, or your stocks.  It
>+        income and expenses, your bank accounts, and your stocks.  It
>         features an intuitive interface while remaining very
>         professional.</para>
> 
>       <para><application>GnuCash</application> provides a smart
>-        register, a hierarchical system of accounts, many keyboard
>+        register, a hierarchical system of accounts, and many keyboard
>         accelerators and auto-completion methods.  It can split a
>         single transaction into several more detailed pieces.
>         <application>GnuCash</application> can import and merge
>@@ -918,10 +925,10 @@
> 	<secondary><application>Gnumeric</application></secondary>
>       </indexterm>
> 
>-      <para><application>Gnumeric</application> is a spreadsheet, part
>+      <para><application>Gnumeric</application> is a spreadsheet program, part
>         of the <application>GNOME</application> desktop environment.
>         It features convenient automatic <quote>guessing</quote> of user
>-        input according to the cell format and an autofill system for
>+        input according to the cell format with an autofill system for
>         many sequences.  It can import files in a number of popular
>         formats like those of <application>Excel</application>, <application>Lotus 1-2-3</application>, or <application>Quattro Pro</application>.
>         <application>Gnumeric</application> supports graphs through
>@@ -931,7 +938,7 @@
>         date, time, and much more.</para>
> 
>       <para>To install <application>Gnumeric</application> as a
>-        package, type in:</para>
>+        package, do:</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r gnumeric</userinput></screen>
> 
>@@ -953,13 +960,13 @@
>       </indexterm>
> 
>       <para><application>Abacus</application> is a small and easy to
>-        use spreadsheet.  It includes many built-in functions useful
>+        use spreadsheet program.  It includes many built-in functions useful
>         in several domains such as statistics, finances, and
>         mathematics.  It can import and export the <application>Excel</application> file format.
>         <application>Abacus</application> can produce &postscript;
>         output.</para>
> 
>-      <para>To install <application>Abacus</application> from its
>+      <para>To install <application>Abacus</application> as a
>         package, do:</para>
> 
>       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r abacus</userinput></screen>

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