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>--- chapter.sgml.orig	Wed Jun 14 10:09:46 2000
>+++ chapter.sgml	Wed Jun 14 10:11:57 2000
>@@ -113,9 +113,9 @@
>       
> 	<listitem>
> 	  <para>Strong <emphasis>TCP/IP networking</emphasis> with
>-	    support for industry standards such as SLIP, PPP, NFS, DHCP
>-	    and NIS support.  This means that your FreeBSD machine can
>-	    inter-operate easily with other systems as well act as an
>+	    support for industry standards such as SLIP, PPP, NFS, DHCP,
>+	    and NIS.  This means that your FreeBSD machine can
>+	    inter-operate easily with other systems as well as act as an
> 	    enterprise server, providing vital functions such as NFS
> 	    (remote file access) and e-mail services or putting your
> 	    organization on the Internet with WWW, FTP, routing and
>@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
> 	<listitem>
> 	  <para><emphasis>Source code</emphasis> for the entire system
> 	    means you have the greatest degree of control over your
>-	    environment.  Why be locked into a proprietary solution and
>+	    environment.  Why be locked into a proprietary solution
> 	    at the mercy of your vendor when you can have a truly Open
> 	    System?</para>
> 	</listitem>
>@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@
> 
> 	  <listitem>
> 	    <para>The central source tree for FreeBSD is maintained by
>-	      <ulink url="http://www.cyclic.com/cyclic-pages/CVS-sheet.html">CVS</ulink>
>+	      <ulink url="http://www.cyclic.com/CVS/index_html">CVS</ulink>
> 	      (Concurrent Version System), a freely available source code
> 	      control tool that comes bundled with FreeBSD.  The primary
> 	      <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi">CVS
>@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@
>         and server support, transaction TCP support, dial-on-demand PPP,
>         integrated DHCP support, an improved SCSI subsystem, ISDN support,
>         support for ATM, FDDI, Fast and Gigabit Ethernet (1000Mbit)
>-        adapters, improved support for the latest Adaptec controllers and
>+        adapters, improved support for the latest Adaptec controllers, and
>         many hundreds of bug fixes.</para>
> 
>       <para>We have also taken the comments and suggestions of many of our
>@@ -637,13 +637,13 @@
>         this (constantly evolving) process is especially welcome!</para>
> 
>       <para>In addition to the base distributions, FreeBSD offers a
>-        ported software collection with hundreds of commonly sought-after
>+        ported software collection with thousands of commonly sought-after
>         programs.  By mid-January 2000, there were nearly 3000 ports!  The
>         list of ports ranges from http (WWW) servers, to games, languages,
>-        editors and almost everything in between.  The entire ports
>+        editors, and almost everything in between.  The entire ports
>         collection requires approximately 50MB of storage, all ports being
>         expressed as <quote>deltas</quote> to their original sources.  This
>-        makes  it much easier for us to update ports, and greatly reduces
>+        makes it much easier for us to update ports, and greatly reduces
>         the disk space demands made by the older 1.0 ports collection.  To
>         compile a port, you simply change to the directory of the program
>         you wish to install, type <command>make install</command>, and let
>@@ -682,7 +682,7 @@
>         </varlistentry>
>       </variablelist>
>     
>-      <para>You can also visit the master (and most frequently updated)
>+      <para>You can also view the master (and most frequently updated)
>         copies at <ulink
> 	url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/">http://www.FreeBSD.org/</ulink>.</para>
> 
>@@ -692,15 +692,15 @@
>         States, which contains the programs that normally use DES.  The
>         auxiliary packages provided separately can be used by anyone.  A
>         freely (from outside the U.S.) exportable European distribution of
>-        DES for our non-U.S.  users also exists and is described in the
>+        DES for our non-U.S. users also exists and is described in the
>         <ulink url="../FAQ/FAQ.html">FreeBSD FAQ</ulink>.</para>
> 
>       <para>If password security for FreeBSD is all you need, and you have
>         no requirement for copying encrypted passwords from different hosts
>         (Suns, DEC machines, etc) into FreeBSD password entries, then
>         FreeBSD's MD5 based security may be all you require!  We feel that
>-        our default security model is more than a match for DES, and without
>-        any messy export issues to deal with.  If you are outside (or even
>+        our default security model is more than a match for DES, and avoids
>+        dealing with any messy export issues.  If you are outside (or even
>         inside) the U.S., give it a try!</para>
>     </sect2>
>   </sect1>

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