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>--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml	Wed Jun 14 00:40:05 2000
>+++ chapter.sgml	Thu Jun 15 11:09:38 2000
>@@ -14,15 +14,15 @@
>     <title>Synopsis</title>
> 
>     <para>The following chapter will attempt to guide you through the
>-      install of FreeBSD on your system.  It can be installed through a
>+      installation of FreeBSD on your system.  It can be installed through a
>       variety of methods, including anonymous FTP (assuming you have
>       network connectivity via modem or local network), CDROM, floppy
>       disk, tape, an MS-DOS partition, or even NFS.</para>
> 
>     <para>No matter which method you choose, you will need to get started
>       by creating the <emphasis>installation disks</emphasis> as described
>-      in the <link linkend="install-floppies">next section</link>.  By
>-      booting into the FreeBSD installer, even if you are not planning on
>+      in the <link linkend="install-floppies">next section</link>.
>+      Booting into the FreeBSD installer, even if you are not planning on
>       installing FreeBSD right away, will provide important information
>       about compatibility with your hardware.  This information may
>       dictate which installation options are even possible for you.  It
>@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
>     <para>If you plan to install FreeBSD via anonymous FTP, the only
>       things you will need are the <link
>       linkend="install-floppies">installation floppies</link>.  The
>-      install program itself will handle anything else that is
>+      installation program itself will handle anything else that is
>       required.</para>
> 
>     <para>For more information about obtaining FreeBSD, see the <link
>@@ -54,10 +54,10 @@
>       <title>Preparing for the Installation</title>
> 
>       <para>There are various things you should do in preparation for the
>-        install.  The following describes what needs to be done prior to
>+        installation.  The following describes what needs to be done prior to
> 	each type of installation.</para>
> 
>-      <para>The first thing you should do is make sure your hardware is
>+      <para>The first thing to do is to make sure your hardware is
> 	supported by FreeBSD.  The list of <link
> 	linkend="install-hw">supported hardware</link> should
> 	come in handy here. ;-)  It would also be a good idea to make a
>@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
> 	  installation boot disks from the image files, do the
> 	  following:</para>
> 
>-	<para>The first thing you will need to do is download the image
>+	<para>Download the image
> 	  files.  These can be retrieved from the <ulink
> 	  url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/i386/&rel.current;-RELEASE/floppies/">floppies directory</ulink>
> 	  of the FreeBSD FTP site or your local mirror.</para>
>@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@
> 	<para>If the CD has El Torito boot support and your system
> 	  supports booting directly from the CDROM drive (many older
> 	  systems do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis>), simply insert the first
>-	  FreeBSD of the set into the drive and reboot your system.  You
>-	  will be put into the install menu directly from the CD.</para>
>+	  CD of the set into the drive and reboot your system.  You
>+	  will be put into the installation menu directly from the CD.</para>
> 
> 	<para>If you are installing from an MS-DOS partition and have
> 	  the proper drivers to access your CD, run the
>@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
> 	  <para>Before invoking the installation, be sure that the CDROM
> 	    is in the drive so that the install probe can find it.  This
> 	    is also true if you wish the CDROM to be added to the default
>-	    system configuration automatically during the install (whether
>+	    system configuration automatically during the installation (whether
> 	    or not you actually use it as the installation media).</para>
> 	</note>
> 
>@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
> 
> 	 <note><para>If you choose to enable anonymous FTP during the
> 	 installation of your system, the installation program will do
>-	 the above procedure for you.</para></note>
>+	 the above for you.</para></note>
> 
>       </sect3>
> 
>@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
> 	<para>If you must install from floppy disk (which we suggest you
> 	  do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis> do), either due to unsupported
> 	  hardware or simply because you insist on doing things the hard
>-	  way, you must first prepare some floppies for the install.</para>
>+	  way, you must first prepare some floppies for the installation.</para>
> 
> 	<para>At a minimum, you will need as many 1.44MB or 1.2MB floppies
> 	  as it takes to hold all the files in the
>@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@
> 	  <command>disklabel</command> and <command>newfs</command>
> 	  commands to put a UFS filesystem on them instead, as the
> 	  following sequence of commands (for a 3.5" 1.44MB floppy)
>-	  illustrate:</para>
>+	  illustrates:</para>
> 
> 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>fdformat -f 1440 fd0.1440</userinput>
> &prompt.root; <userinput>disklabel -w -r fd0.1440 floppy3</userinput>
>@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@
> 
> 	  <screen><userinput>ftp://209.55.82.20/pub/FreeBSD/&rel.current;-RELEASE</userinput></screen>
> 
>-	  <para>There are two FTP installation modes you can choose from,
>+	  <para>There are two FTP installation modes you can choose from:
> 	    active or passive FTP.</para>
> 
> 	  <variablelist>
>@@ -524,8 +524,8 @@
>       <para>Once you have completed the pre-installation step relevant to
>         your situation, you are ready to install FreeBSD!</para>
> 
>-      <para>Although you should not experience any difficulties, there is
>-        always the chance you might, no matter how slight it is.  If this
>+      <para>Although you should not experience any difficulty, there is
>+        always the chance that you may, no matter how slight it is.  If this
> 	is the case in your situation, then you may wish to go back and
> 	re-read the relevant preparation section or sections.  Perhaps you
> 	will come across something you missed the first time.  If you are
>@@ -805,7 +805,7 @@
> 	</listitem>
>       </itemizedlist>
> 
>-      <para>Unmaintained drivers, they might or might not work for your
>+      <para>Unmaintained drivers, which might or might not work for your
>         hardware:</para>
> 
>       <itemizedlist>

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