| Summary: | Small blurb in explaining-bsd article | ||
|---|---|---|---|
| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | Aasmund Eikli <inter> |
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | Giorgos Keramidas <keramida> |
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | ||
| Priority: | Normal | ||
| Version: | Latest | ||
| Hardware: | Any | ||
| OS: | Any | ||
State Changed
From-To: open->closed
I just committed a slightly modified version of the patch.
The web interface to the CVS repository seems to be temporarily
misbehaving, so I'm pasting the diff output here:
% <listitem>
% + <para>BSD projects have a better reputation for the quality and
% + completeness of their documentation.. The various documentation
% + projects aim to provide actively updated documentation, in many
% + languages, and covering all aspects of the system.</para>
% + </listitem>
Wording changes here and there and a missing </para> are the
changes I made.
You wrote:
> I suppose this is a test patch to see if I did this right. Sorry if I
> messed up.
You didn't mess up at all. Thanks for the patch :)
Responsible Changed From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida |
I was skimming the explaining-bsd article and it occured to me that in it's points on which OS to use it doesn't mention any documentation effort. I included a small addition to the list. Fix: I suppose this is a test patch to see if I did this right. Sorry if I messed up. <listitem> + <para>BSD projects have a large emphasis on good documentation. The various + documentation projects aim to provide actively updated documentation in many languages + covering all aspects of the individual BSD system. + </listitem> + + <listitem> <para>The BSD license may be more attractive than the GPL.</para> </listitem>--HYl5vUPrZpTStfFTaunaZHRexNH4ak4MD9dEUgf5RufGt0Uu Content-Type: text/plain; name="file.diff" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="file.diff" --- article.sgml.old Fri Jul 14 23:22:07 2006 +++ article.sgml Fri Jul 14 23:32:52 2006 @@ -547,6 +547,12 @@ </listitem> How-To-Repeat: n/a