Bug 103286

Summary: [patch] Improved wording and error removal
Product: Documentation Reporter: Jörg Pernfuß <elessar>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description Jörg Pernfuß 2006-09-15 00:10:21 UTC 
In http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/history.html the paragraphs about RELENG_5 and RELENG_6 sound really awkward to me. I am not a native speaker though, so take my rephrasing with a grain of salt.

Apart from that, the RELENG_5 paragraph states that there will be additional releases from that branch after 5.5-REL. I am in serious doubt.

Fix: Apply this patch to doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v 1.114
How-To-Repeat: Read http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/history.html
1.3.1 A Brief History of FreeBSD
Comment 1 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-09-22 10:41:12 UTC 
brueffer    2006-09-22 09:41:03 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Grammar and wording fixes, also some updates about the status of our branches.
  
  PR:             docs/103286
  Submitted by:   Joerg Pernfuß <elessar@bsdforen.de>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.115     +6 -6      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml
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Comment 2 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-09-22 10:43:13 UTC 
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From-To: open->closed

Committed with one small change (present tense -> past tense). 
Thanks!