Bug 105216

Summary: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar
Product: Documentation Reporter: Gabor Kovesdan <gabor>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Daniel Gerzo <danger>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: gabor
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Gabor Kovesdan freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-06 18:00:55 UTC 
- "is" sounds weird with "these", "are" is better in this case
Comment 1 Daniel Gerzo freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-06 19:27:04 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-www->danger

Take
Comment 2 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-07 16:54:40 UTC 
danger      2006-11-07 16:54:31 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en                   about.sgml 
  Log:
  - improve grammar
  - double space after full stop
  
  Submitted by: gabor
  Approved by: keramida (mentor), trhodes (mentor)
  PR: www/105216
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.11      +2 -2      www/en/about.sgml
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Comment 3 Daniel Gerzo freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-07 17:01:17 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed with one minor nit - double space after full stop. 
Anyway, thank you very much for your report!