Bug 105499

Summary: [PATCH] Minor style fixes to sun4v.sgml
Product: Documentation Reporter: Rudolf Čejka <cejkar>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Remko Lodder <remko>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description Rudolf Čejka 2006-11-14 01:20:01 UTC
Minor style fixes to sun4v.sgml: Use first letter in upper case and
end the item with a dot.

--- www/en/platforms/sun4v.sgml.orig	Tue Nov 14 02:01:53 2006
+++ www/en/platforms/sun4v.sgml	Tue Nov 14 02:02:13 2006
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
   <ul>
     <li>Load balance interrupts between CPUs.</li>
     <li>Add support for the serial port.</li>
-    <li>system reset and exit to OFW need to be implemented (use sc to reset)</li>
+    <li>System reset and exit to OFW need to be implemented (use sc to reset).</li>
   </ul>
 
   <h3><a name="links">Pointers Of Interest</a></h3>
Comment 1 Rudolf Čejka 2006-11-14 01:39:55 UTC
> ...

And maybe it would be better to remove dots from links (2 places)
in Pointers of Interest.

-- 
Rudolf Cejka <cejkar at fit.vutbr.cz> http://www.fit.vutbr.cz/~cejkar
Brno University of Technology, Faculty of Information Technology
Bozetechova 2, 612 66  Brno, Czech Republic
Comment 2 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-14 18:20:33 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-www->remko

I'll take it.
Comment 3 jb freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-14 20:55:28 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->freebsd-bugs

Fixed.
Comment 4 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-15 08:11:11 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

John had committed the fix, thanks!
Comment 5 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2006-11-16 19:32:43 UTC
remko       2006-11-16 19:32:36 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en/platforms         sun4v.sgml 
  Log:
  Capitalise the first word of the line (system->System).
  Add an extra dot on the end of the line.
  Remove two dots that are not needed.
  
  PR:                     www/105499
  Submitted by:           Rudolf Cejka <cejkar at fit dot vutbr dot cz>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.7       +4 -4      www/en/platforms/sun4v.sgml
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