Bug 119463

Summary: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml
Product: Documentation Reporter: gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description gregory delfly 2008-01-08 18:00:08 UTC 
In /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml,
thereis a superfluous ';' after the word "capability" (which I suppose comes from a copy-paste move, since there are other instances of "capability;" before, which are however perfectly relevant)

Fix: see patch attached below

Patch attached with submission follows:
How-To-Repeat: read it again
Comment 1 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2008-01-08 18:07:59 UTC 
gregory delfly wrote:

Hello,

Thanks for all the PR tickets, it's greatly appreciated, one question / 
remark from me though; can you please try to bundle the changes to one 
chapter.sgml into one diff/ticket ? makes it much easier to process and
it all affects the same file so a bit of overkill ;-)

But again thanks!

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Comment 2 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2008-01-14 13:40:23 UTC 
keramida    2008-01-14 13:40:19 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Reword a bit a part which seemed confusing.  Using shorter sentences
  here is probably better for non-native English speakers (like me).
  
  PR:             docs/119463
  Submitted by:   Gregory Delfly, gregoryd.freebsd at free.fr
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.99      +3 -3      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml
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Comment 3 Giorgos Keramidas freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2008-01-14 13:40:59 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Hi Gregory, 
I reworded the text of the peragraph a bit, to avoid the need 
for a ';' separating two sub-sentences.  The new text is shown 
below: 

-        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability; 
-          that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in 
-         read-write mode.</para> 
+        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability. 
+         When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application> 
+         opens the printer in read-write mode.</para> 

Does this look better?
Comment 4 Giorgos Keramidas freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2008-01-14 13:40:59 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida

I'll handle this PR, if Gregory wants to make more changes.