Bug 127027

Summary:	update to fbsd handbook
Product:	Documentation	Reporter:	Eitan Adler <eadler>
Component:	Books & Articles	Assignee:	Manolis Kiagias <manolis>
Status:	Closed FIXED
Severity:	Affects Only Me
Priority:	Normal
Version:	Latest
Hardware:	Any
OS:	Any

Description Eitan Adler freebsd_committer

2008-09-01 19:50:01 UTC

http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/arch-handbook/boot-kernel.html 
"To where exactly is the execution passed by the loader, i.e. what is the kernel's actual entry point. Let us take a look at the command that links the kernel:"
should read 
"In order to see where the kernel is actually loaded you need to examine the command that links the kernel"  or something to that extent.  The current text is barely proper English.

Comment 1 Manolis Kiagias freebsd_committer

2008-09-01 21:04:56 UTC

Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->manolis

Assign to me

Comment 2 dfilter service freebsd_committer

2008-09-03 16:46:08 UTC

manolis     2008-09-03 15:45:54 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Reword a paragraph to more proper English
  
  PR:             docs/127027
  Submitted by:   Eitan Adler <eitan.adler+fbsd@gmail.com>
  Approved by:    gabor (mentor)
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.27      +4 -3      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.sgml
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Comment 3 Manolis Kiagias freebsd_committer

2008-09-03 16:51:17 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

This is now fixed. Thanks for your submission!