| Summary: | Cleanup for ipf documentation | ||
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| Product: | Documentation | Reporter: | Chris Pepper <pepper> |
| Component: | Books & Articles | Assignee: | Manolis Kiagias <manolis> |
| Status: | Closed FIXED | ||
| Severity: | Affects Only Me | ||
| Priority: | Normal | ||
| Version: | Latest | ||
| Hardware: | Any | ||
| OS: | Any | ||
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Description
Chris Pepper
2009-02-10 18:00:00 UTC
Hi Chris, I'm trying to compare your fixed version to the current one. Could you perhaps generate a unified diff against the SGML files? It would be much easier for us to parse. Thanks! BTW: The primer can be found at this URL: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/index.html -- Tom Rhodes State Changed From-To: open->feedback Feedback sent via email (should show up in the PR soon). Tom Rhodes wrote: > Hi Chris, > > I'm trying to compare your fixed version to the current one. Could > you perhaps generate a unified diff against the SGML files? It > would be much easier for us to parse. Thanks! > > BTW: The primer can be found at this URL: > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/index.html Tom, Can you give me a URL for the SGML source you want me to generate a patch against? Thanks, Chris -- Chris Pepper: <http://cbio.mskcc.org/> <http://www.extrapepperoni.com/> Responsible Changed From-To: freebsd-doc->manolis Over to me, I am already working on a patch for 'firewalls' My cleaned up chapter.sgml is attached. Chris State Changed From-To: feedback->open Feedback was received manolis 2009-05-13 17:20:58 UTC
FreeBSD doc repository
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml
Log:
A revamp of Handbook's 'firewalls' chapter.
This is a rather lengthy patch, that attempts to fix several problems:
- Reduce repetition. There are several paragraphs in the original text that are repeated throughout the sections
- Markup fixes. Replace single quotes with <literal> tags, add <acronym>s and several other changes to improve markup consistency
- Convert to passive voice where possible, eliminate few first person references
- Several grammar and language fixes
- The original text implied that the same TCP packet would go back and forth between source and destination. Rephrase relevant paragraphs to clarify these are different packets
- Includes many fixes submitted in a PR [1] and a link fix submitted on -doc [2]
- Numerous other smaller changes, too many to mention here
PR: docs/131568 [1]
Submitted by: Chris Pepper <pepper@cbio.mskcc.org> [1]
Submitted by: Phillip Nordwall <Phillip.Nordwall@wwu.edu> [2]
Reviewed by: trhodes, keramida
Revision Changes Path
1.87 +452 -502 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml
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State Changed From-To: open->closed Most changes committed as part of a longer patch. Thanks for submitting this! |