Bug 137243

Summary: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2
Product: Documentation Reporter: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
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Description Glen Barber 2009-07-29 17:10:04 UTC 
Section 24.2.2 [1] of the handbook contains minor grammatical errors.  The handbook states the following:
"This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update will be ran." 

This should either be: 

a - This entry states that once every day, freebsd-update will run.

or

b - This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update utility will be run.


[1] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-freebsdupdate.html

Fix: The attached patch contains a grammatical fix for the handbook, assuming the first case in the description of this PR




Patch attached with submission follows:
Comment 1 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2009-08-11 19:49:11 UTC 
manolis     2009-08-11 18:48:58 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Minor grammar fixes
  
  PR:             docs/137243
  Submitted by:   Glen Barber <glen.j.barber at gmail dot com>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.244     +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
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Comment 2 Manolis Kiagias freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2009-08-11 19:50:29 UTC 
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From-To: open->closed

Committed, thanks!