Bug 145251

Summary: [patch] iscsi_initiator.4 man page formatting and syntax changes
Product: Documentation Reporter: Hywel Mallett <hywel>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Christian Brueffer <brueffer>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Hywel Mallett 2010-03-31 23:50:01 UTC 
iscsi_initiator man pages has a few formatting, syntax and spelling errors.

Fix: Patch from CURRENT attached

Patch attached with submission follows:
How-To-Repeat: man iscsi_initiator
Comment 1 Mark Linimon freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2010-04-01 02:22:06 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-bugs->freebsd-doc

reclassify.
Comment 2 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2010-05-09 22:34:14 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->patched

Committed together with some more changes, thanks!
Comment 3 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2010-05-09 22:34:14 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer

MFC reminder.
Comment 4 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2010-05-09 22:34:14 UTC 
Author: brueffer
Date: Sun May  9 21:34:05 2010
New Revision: 207829
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207829

Log:
  Various wording, spelling and markup fixes.
  
  PR:		145251
  Submitted by:	Hywel Mallett <hywel@hmallett.co.uk> (partly)
  MFC after:	3 week

Modified:
  head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4

Modified: head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4	Sun May  9 20:32:00 2010	(r207828)
+++ head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4	Sun May  9 21:34:05 2010	(r207829)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd February 23, 2007
+.Dd May 9, 2010
 .Dt ISCSI_INITIATOR 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -48,34 +48,39 @@ iscsi_initiator_load="YES"
 The
 .Nm
 implements the kernel side of the Internet SCSI (iSCSI) network
-protocol standard, the user land companion is
+protocol standard.
+The userland companion is
 .Xr iscontrol 8 ,
 and permits access to remote
 .Em virtual
 SCSI devices via
 .Xr cam 4 .
 .Sh SYSCTL VARIABLES
-.Bl -tag -width ".Va net.iscsi.n.targeaddress"
+.Bl -tag -width "net.iscsi.n.targedaddress"
 .It Va debug.iscsi_initiator
 set the debug-level, 0 means no debugging, 9 for maximum.
 .It Va net.iscsi.isid
 the initiator part of the Session Identifier.
-.It "the following are informative only:"
+.El
+.Pp
+The following are informative only:
+.Pp
+.Bl -tag -width "net.iscsi.n.targedaddress"
 .It Va net.iscsi.driver_version
 the current version of the driver.
 .It Va net.iscsi.sessions
 the number of current active sessions.
 .It Va net.iscsi.n.targetname
-is the targe name of session
+the target name of session
 .Em n .
-.It Va net.iscsi.n.targeaddress
-is the IP address of the target of session
+.It Va net.iscsi.n.targedaddress
+the IP address of the target of session
 .Em n .
 .It Va net.iscsi.n.stats
-are some statistics for session
+statistics for session
 .Em n
 .It Va net.iscsi.n.pid
-is the 
+the 
 .Em "process id"
 of the userland side of session
 .Em n ,
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Comment 5 Christian Brueffer freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2010-07-25 21:08:15 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: patched->closed

MFCs done.