Bug 154766

Adding a grammatical fix to this, as well. I am okay with this fix.

Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
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RCS file: /home/jhelfman/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000	1.1
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	14 Feb 2011 18:53:16 -0000
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
  	url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server</ulink> software
        is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;.
        For users that think it is convenient to update their systems
-      against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may
+      against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may
        help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked
        &os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster
        updates for a number of machines.</para>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
        It is sourced during all build operations.</para>
  
      <para>Here is the default <filename>build.conf</filename>, which should
-      be modified to suite your own environment.</para>
+      be modified to suit your own environment.</para>
  
      <programlisting>
  
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@
  	<para>Adding <option>-j <replaceable>NUMBER</replaceable></option>
  	  flags to <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget> and
  	  <maketarget>obj</maketarget> targets in the
-	  <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script, may speed up
+	  <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script may speed up
  	  processing depending on the hardware used, however it is not
  	  necessary.  Using these flags in other targets is not
  	  recommended, as it may cause the build to become unreliable.</para>

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Jason Helfman
System Administrator
experts-exchange.com
http://www.experts-exchange.com/M_4830110.html
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Comment 2 Manolis Kiagias 2011-02-14 20:14:42 UTC

Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->manolis

I will take care of this

Comment 3 Manolis Kiagias 2011-02-14 20:45:43 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Fixes committed, thanks!