Bug 156514

Summary: incomplete sample in handbook section 27.2.1.2.2
Product: Documentation Reporter: Keve Nagy <keve>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Ryusuke SUZUKI <ryusuke>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description Keve Nagy 2011-04-20 10:40:10 UTC 
Handbook section "27.2.1.2.2 PPP and Dynamic IP Addresses" shows a configuration line sample as:
  " 17      set ifaddr 10.0.0.1/0 10.0.0.2/0 255.255.255.255      "
then two paragraphs below refers to "The last argumet (0.0.0.0) tells ...", where that (0.0.0.0) last arguent is obviously missing from the end of that sample line.

Fix: 

Add the missing "0.0.0.0" text to the end of the sample config line!
How-To-Repeat: Please see section 27.2.1.2.2 in 
 http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/userppp.html 
or my highlighted screenshot at
 http://www.wuala.com/keve/public/freebsd.userppp.docbug.png
Comment 1 Ryusuke SUZUKI freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2011-04-28 14:50:52 UTC 
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->ryusuke

I'll take this.
Comment 2 Ryusuke SUZUKI freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2011-04-30 12:25:47 UTC 
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Hi, Keve-san.

Thanks for reporting PR: 15614 and preparing your screenshot.

I agree that "0.0.0.0" is needed at the end of the config line.

[Ref: /usr/share/examples/ppp/ppp.conf.sample]

I will commit following patch.

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--- chapter.sgml	1 Dec 2010 20:37:05 -0000	1.195
+++ chapter.sgml	30 Apr 2011 11:20:12 -0000
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@
 	    <link linkend="userppp-staticIP">PPP and Static IP
 	    Addresses</link>, with the following change:</para>

-	  <programlisting>17      set ifaddr 10.0.0.1/0 10.0.0.2/0 255.255.255.255</programlisting>
+	  <programlisting>17      set ifaddr 10.0.0.1/0 10.0.0.2/0 255.255.255.255 0.0.0.0</programlisting>

 	  <para>Again, do not include the line number, it is just for
 	    reference.  Indentation of at least one space is

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Regards,
  Ryusuke

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Comment 3 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2011-05-01 15:29:20 UTC 
ryusuke     2011-05-01 14:29:06 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Add missing "0.0.0.0" to the end of the sample config line.
  
  PR: docs/156514
  Submitted by:   Keve Nagy <keve at safe-mail dot net>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.196     +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
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Comment 4 Ryusuke SUZUKI freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2011-05-01 15:36:07 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed. Thanks!