Bug 17292

Summary: OpenSSH man pages cleanup
Product: Documentation Reporter: peter.jeremy <peter.jeremy>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description peter.jeremy 2000-03-09 21:50:00 UTC 
	General cleanups in the ssh.1 and sshd.8 man pages to
	improve legibility.

Fix: Following are some patches to fix the following:
- typos
- Add double spaces following full stops to improve typeset output
- mdoc-ification.  (Though I'm uncertain whether option values and
  contents should be .Dq or something else).
- Fix a missed /etc/ssh change
- Expand wording on RandomSeed and behaviour when X11 isn't forwarded.
- Change examples to literal mode.

	In addition, though not included here (for readability reasons),
	both man pages could do with a ",s/ *$//" to delete the
	trailing whitespace.
How-To-Repeat: 
	Code inspection.  View output with "man -t | gv" equivalent.
Comment 1 Sheldon Hearn 2000-03-10 10:45:57 UTC 
On Fri, 10 Mar 2000 08:50:34 +1100, peter.jeremy@alcatel.com.au wrote:

> - Add double spaces following full stops to improve typeset output

While you're touching those lines, you may as well move the trailing
sentences down onto new lines.  This change should be done as a separate
commit after the rest of your changes.

In fact, would you mind if I took this and did it as a series of
commits, one for each kind of fix?

Ciao,
Sheldon.
Comment 2 nik freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2000-03-10 11:48:16 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed, thanks