Bug 174840

Summary: the grammar of 9.1-RELEASE announcements
Product: Documentation Reporter: deeptech71 <deeptech71>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description deeptech71@gmail.com 2012-12-30 21:00:00 UTC 
Certain web pages are in need of a review by an expert on English grammar.

On http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/announce.html,

  "until it's End-of-Life (EoL) date of"
should instead be
  "until its End-of-Life (EoL) date of".

On http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/relnotes.html and http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/relnotes-detailed.html,

  "more then 4"
should instead be
  "more than 4";

  "A bug in ae(4) driver"
should instead be
  "A bug in the ae(4) driver";

in
  "It now works",
"It" should be replaced with "bge(4)" or whatever "It" was supposed to refer to ("It" currently refers to "a bug which [...]");

  "cxgbe(4) and cxgb(4) driver"
should instead be
  "cxgbe(4) and cxgb(4) drivers";

  "multiple FIB"
should instead be
  "multiple FIBs";

  "clang"
should instead be
  "Clang";

and may I be relieved from having to describe hundreds of other errors here -- review the release announcements yourself.
Comment 1 deeptech71@gmail.com 2013-03-29 07:05:12 UTC 
FUCK THIS SHIT


This PR can be closed.
Comment 2 Johann Kois freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-04-13 11:21:56 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Close this PR as the sender asked so nicely and in a mature language for it...