Bug 178890

Summary:	A typo.
Product:	Documentation	Reporter:	Li <fender0107401>
Component:	Books & Articles	Assignee:	freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status:	Closed FIXED
Severity:	Affects Only Me
Priority:	Normal
Version:	Latest
Hardware:	Any
OS:	Any

Description Li 2013-05-24 04:00:00 UTC

http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls-ipfw.html

31.6. IPFW

IPFW) is a stateful firewall written for FreeBSD which also provides a traffic shaper, packet scheduler, and in-kernel NAT.

Change "IPFW)" to "IPFW".

That should be a typo.

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BTW:

The original description looks like someone developed IPFW for FreeBSD. Can you change this description to something like the following: 

IPFW is a stateful firewall written by FreeBSD community.

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Comment 1 dfilter service freebsd_committer

2013-05-24 08:40:55 UTC

Author: pluknet
Date: Fri May 24 07:40:47 2013
New Revision: 41739
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41739

Log:
  Fix a typo.
  
  PR:		docs/178890
  Submitted by:	Li <fender0107401@gmail.com>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml	Thu May 23 20:30:42 2013	(r41738)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml	Fri May 24 07:40:47 2013	(r41739)
@@ -1974,7 +1974,7 @@ pass in quick on rl0 proto tcp from any 
       <secondary>IPFW</secondary>
     </indexterm>
 
-    <para><acronym>IPFW</acronym>) is a stateful firewall written for
+    <para><acronym>IPFW</acronym> is a stateful firewall written for
       &os; which also provides a traffic shaper, packet scheduler,
       and in-kernel NAT.</para>
 
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Comment 2 Sergey Kandaurov freebsd_committer

2013-05-24 08:43:41 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed, thanks! 
As for the latter, it's better to discuss this on freebsd-doc@ mailing list.