Bug 181075

Summary: Clear trailing whitespace from network-servers section of handbood
Product: Documentation Reporter: Ken Reed <kreed002>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Warren Block <wblock>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description Ken Reed 2013-08-05 19:40:01 UTC
Removed trailing whitespace where found from en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers.

A minor update, but a necessary one at some point.

Fix: Patch attached with submission follows:
Comment 1 Warren Block freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-08-05 20:07:36 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->wblock

Take.
Comment 2 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-08-05 20:16:16 UTC
Author: wblock
Date: Mon Aug  5 19:16:03 2013
New Revision: 42496
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42496

Log:
  Move programlistings outside of paragraphs.  Remove a space after a prompt
  as mentioned in PR docs/181075.  Because this is inside a screen element,
  it is really content, not whitespace.
  
  PR:		docs/181075 (partial)
  Submitted by:	Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 15:41:48 2013	(r42495)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 19:16:03 2013	(r42496)
@@ -1545,25 +1545,25 @@ Exports list on foobar:
 
 	  <procedure>
 	    <step>
-	      <para><programlisting>nisdomainname="test-domain"</programlisting>
+	      <programlisting>nisdomainname="test-domain"</programlisting>
 
-		This line will set the NIS domainname to
+		<para>This line will set the NIS domainname to
 		<literal>test-domain</literal>
 		upon network setup (e.g., after reboot).</para>
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <para><programlisting>nis_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
+	      <programlisting>nis_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 
-		This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
+		<para>This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
 		processes when the networking is next brought
 		up.</para>
 	    </step>
 
 	    <step>
-	      <para><programlisting>nis_yppasswdd_enable="YES"</programlisting>
+	      <programlisting>nis_yppasswdd_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 
-		This will enable the <command>rpc.yppasswdd</command>
+		<para>This will enable the <command>rpc.yppasswdd</command>
 		daemon which, as mentioned above, will allow users to
 		change their NIS password from a client
 		machine.</para>
@@ -2914,7 +2914,7 @@ cn: Manager</programlisting>
       <para>There will be a request for the password specified
 	earlier, and the output should look like this:</para>
 
-      <screen>Enter LDAP Password: 
+      <screen>Enter LDAP Password:
 adding new entry "dc=example,dc=com"
 
 adding new entry "cn=Manager,dc=example,dc=com"</screen>
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Comment 3 dfilter service freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-08-05 20:21:44 UTC
Author: wblock
Date: Mon Aug  5 19:21:36 2013
New Revision: 42497
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42497

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.
  
  PR:		docs/181075 (partial)
  Submitted by:	Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 19:16:03 2013	(r42496)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 19:21:36 2013	(r42497)
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@ mountd_flags="-r"</programlisting>
 	more information about using rc scripts.</para>
 
       <para>NFS services can now be started by running the following
-	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as 
+	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as
 	<username>root</username>:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsd start</userinput></screen>
@@ -1547,7 +1547,7 @@ Exports list on foobar:
 	    <step>
 	      <programlisting>nisdomainname="test-domain"</programlisting>
 
-		<para>This line will set the NIS domainname to
+	      <para>This line will set the NIS domainname to
 		<literal>test-domain</literal>
 		upon network setup (e.g., after reboot).</para>
 	    </step>
@@ -1555,7 +1555,7 @@ Exports list on foobar:
 	    <step>
 	      <programlisting>nis_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 
-		<para>This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
+	      <para>This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
 		processes when the networking is next brought
 		up.</para>
 	    </step>
@@ -1563,10 +1563,10 @@ Exports list on foobar:
 	    <step>
 	      <programlisting>nis_yppasswdd_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 
-		<para>This will enable the <command>rpc.yppasswdd</command>
-		daemon which, as mentioned above, will allow users to
-		change their NIS password from a client
-		machine.</para>
+	      <para>This will enable the
+		<command>rpc.yppasswdd</command> daemon which, as
+		mentioned above, will allow users to change their NIS
+		password from a client machine.</para>
 	    </step>
 	  </procedure>
 
@@ -4383,7 +4383,8 @@ mail            IN      A       192.168.
 
     <sect2>
       <title><acronym
-	  role="Domain Name Security Extensions">DNSSEC</acronym></title>
+	  role="Domain Name Security
+	  Extensions">DNSSEC</acronym></title>
 
       <indexterm>
 	<primary>BIND</primary>
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Comment 4 Warren Block freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-08-05 20:21:57 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Changes committed, thanks!