Bug 182004

Summary: Missing a word(a nother solution).
Product: Documentation Reporter: Li <fender0107401>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody) <doc>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   

Description Li 2013-09-11 01:40:00 UTC 
I am sorry.

I reported this problem a few minutes ago, but I did not give a perfect solution.

In our handbook: 7.5.3. KMyMoney

Here is the original sentence:
KMyMoney is a personal finance created by the KDE community.

I think the better one should be:
KMyMoney is a personal financial tool created by the KDE community.

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In other words, I think we should add tool and also change finance to financial.
Comment 1 Gavin Atkinson freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2013-09-13 09:46:41 UTC 
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Close as duplicate of docs/182003 by same submitter, which has a 
slightly more correct solution.