Bug 182087

Summary:	First question in FreeBSD FAQ has grammatical error
Product:	Documentation	Reporter:	mike
Component:	Books & Articles	Assignee:	Isabell Long <issyl0>
Status:	Closed FIXED
Severity:	Affects Only Me
Priority:	Normal
Version:	Latest
Hardware:	Any
OS:	Any

Description mike 2013-09-14 13:20:00 UTC

In the FreeBSD FAQ, in both places where the first question appears, the question is 
an incomplete sentence.

Fix: 

Insert the word "uses" after "FreeBSD", or perhaps rephrase the question to ask "Why does 
FreeBSD use a lot of swap space, even when the computer has free memory left?"
How-To-Repeat: See http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/misc.html where it says "15.1. 
FreeBSD a lot of swap space even when the computer has free memory left. Why?"

Comment 1 Isabell Long freebsd_committer

2013-09-27 08:56:07 UTC

Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->issyl0

I'll take it.

Comment 2 dfilter service freebsd_committer

2013-09-27 09:03:37 UTC

Author: issyl0
Date: Fri Sep 27 08:03:30 2013
New Revision: 42716
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42716

Log:
  Add a missing word to a sentence in a FAQ question.
  
  PR:		docs/182087

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Sep 27 07:52:16 2013	(r42715)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Sep 27 08:03:30 2013	(r42716)
@@ -7236,7 +7236,7 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12"</programlisting>
     <qandaset>
       <qandaentry>
 	<question id="more-swap">
-	  <para>&os; a lot of swap space even when the computer has
+	  <para>&os; uses a lot of swap space even when the computer has
 	    free memory left.  Why?</para>
 	</question>
 
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Comment 3 Isabell Long freebsd_committer

2013-09-27 09:06:59 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed. Thanks!