Bug 184735

Comment 1 Warren Block 2013-12-13 01:18:45 UTC

Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->wblock

Take.

Comment 2 dfilter service 2013-12-13 01:26:54 UTC

Author: wblock
Date: Fri Dec 13 01:26:47 2013
New Revision: 43326
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43326

Log:
  Improve grammar, clarity.  Expanded modifications inspired by PR.
  
  PR:		docs/184735
  Submitted by:	Diane Bruce <db@db.net>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Wed Dec 11 05:00:42 2013	(r43325)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Fri Dec 13 01:26:47 2013	(r43326)
@@ -3844,14 +3844,14 @@ ALWAYS_KEEP_DISTFILES=	yes
       <sect2 xml:id="uses">
 	<title><varname>USES</varname></title>
 
-	<para>There several parameters exist for defining different
-	  kind of features and dependencies that the port in question
-	  uses.  They can be specified by adding the following line to
-	  the <filename>Makefile</filename> of the port:</para>
+	<para>Parameters can be added to define different
+	  features and dependencies used by the port.
+	  They are specified by adding this line to the
+	  <filename>Makefile</filename>:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>USES= feature[:arguments]</programlisting>
 
-	<para>For the complete list of such values, please see
+	<para>For the complete list of values, please see
 	  <xref linkend="uses-values"/>.</para>
 
 	<warning>
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Comment 3 Warren Block 2013-12-13 01:27:07 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Expanded correction committed.  Thanks!