Bug 185632

Summary:

Handbook typo

Product:

Documentation

Reporter:

Jack Force <jack1243star>

Component:

Books & Articles

Assignee:

Remko Lodder <remko>

Status:

Closed FIXED

Severity:

Affects Only Me

Priority:

Normal

Version:

Latest

Hardware:

Any

OS:

Any

Attachments:

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Description Jack Force 2014-01-10 08:40:00 UTC

There is a typo in the Handbook.
Section 27.6.1. "Basic Configuration", first paragraph:

"If order to have..." => "In order to have..."

The following paragraph also starts with "In order to..." which is overly verbose.

Fix: The diff file attached makes the sentence more clear and concise.

Patch attached with submission follows:
How-To-Repeat: Navigate to the following URL:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/mail-advanced.html

Comment 1 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer

2014-01-10 08:46:20 UTC

Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->remko

Take this PR

Comment 2 dfilter service freebsd_committer

2014-01-10 13:48:43 UTC

Author: remko
Date: Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014
New Revision: 43464
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43464

Log:
  Correct a typo and rewrap the paragraph a bit so that it is
  conform the FDP.
  
  PR:		185632
  Submitted by:	Jack Force

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 10 11:03:44 2014	(r43463)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014	(r43464)
@@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@ www.example.org</programlisting>
 
       <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as
 	long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or
-	the network has access to a configured
-	<acronym>DNS</acronym> server.  If order to have mail
-	delivered to the  <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host,
-	do one of the following:</para>
+	the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym>
+	server.  To have email delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym>
+	on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
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Comment 3 Remko Lodder freebsd_committer

2014-01-10 13:49:00 UTC

State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed. Thanks!