Bug 20015

Summary: [patch] Updates for src/release/i386/RELNOTES.TXT
Product: Documentation Reporter: bmah <bmah>
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: ben <ben>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me    
Priority: Normal    
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
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Description bmah 2000-07-18 22:10:03 UTC
The attached patch corrects the following (IMHO) problems in the
i386 release notes on the RELENG_4 branch.  Some of these might also
be appropriate for 5-current and/or the Alpha as well.  To wit:

1.  Correct FTP site for 4.0-stable snapshots and delete sentence
    fragment immediately following.

2.  Add FDDI section to table of contents (see #5 below) and add
    one line of whitespace.

3.  In userland section, document csh->tcsh, more->less, and 
    colorized ls.

4.  In Ethernet section, do:

	s/gigabit ethernet/Gigabit Ethernet/
	s/fast ethernet/Fast Ethernet/
	s/ethernet/Ethernet/

5.  Pull DEC DEFPA/DEFEA *FDDI* cards out of the *Ethernet* section
    and into their own second-level section.

6.  Add missing period in section header in ATM section.

7.  Tweak upgrading sectio with some new text, not sure if this is
    much better though.

8.  Add a blurb about the -stable mailing list.
Comment 1 ben freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2000-07-19 00:21:35 UTC
Bruce A. Mah wrote:

> The attached patch corrects the following (IMHO) problems in the
> i386 release notes on the RELENG_4 branch.  Some of these might also
> be appropriate for 5-current and/or the Alpha as well.  To wit:

You don't give up on the release/texts updates, do you? :-)

The userland changes (tcsh, less, ls -G) are certainly applicable to the
Alpha, as are the s/ethernet/Ethernet/ bits.  If you have time could you
send a patch for the alpha/RELNOTES.TXT file as well?  If not I'll look
at it myself tomorrow perhaps.

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Comment 2 ben freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2000-07-19 00:34:48 UTC
Ben Smithurst wrote:

> If you have time could you
> send a patch for the alpha/RELNOTES.TXT file as well?

actually, no need -- your i386 patch applied with only one failure
(which I've fixed manually) to the alpha file.

I'll merge what's needed into the HEAD version first, and commit the
RELENG_4 stuff ASAP unless someone gets there first.

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Comment 3 ben freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2000-07-19 01:05:16 UTC
Responsible Changed
From-To: freebsd-doc->ben

I'm doing this...
Comment 4 Cyrille Lefevre 2000-07-20 05:48:23 UTC
bmah@cisco.com (Bruce A. Mah) writes:

[snip]
> ***************
> *** 634,639 ****
> --- 649,662 ----
>   Otherwise, for any questions or tech support issues, please send mail to:
> 
>                   freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.org
> + 
> + 
> + If you're tracking the -stable development efforts, you should
> + definitely join the -stable mailing list, in order to keep abreast
> + of recent developments and changes that may affect the way you
> + use and maintain the system:
> + 
> + 		freebsd-stable@FreeBSD.org
> 

also, it would be interresting to explain in some lines how to subscribe
to this list. else, you'll have plenty of empty "subscribe" messages...
such as :

*****
to subscribe to this mailing list, send a request to majordomo@FreeBSD.org
with the following commands in the body of your email message:

                subscribe freebsd-stable
                end

or from another account, besides yourself:

                subscribe freebsd-stable <your email address>
                end
*****

Cyrille.
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Comment 5 Ben Smithurst 2000-07-20 14:00:44 UTC
Cyrille Lefevre wrote:

>> + 
>> + 
>> + If you're tracking the -stable development efforts, you should
>> + definitely join the -stable mailing list, in order to keep abreast
>> + of recent developments and changes that may affect the way you
>> + use and maintain the system:
>> + 
>> + 		freebsd-stable@FreeBSD.org
>> 
>  
>  also, it would be interresting to explain in some lines how to subscribe
>  to this list. else, you'll have plenty of empty "subscribe" messages...
>  such as :

Well, it's already mentioned further down, so I don't know if this is
really necessary.

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Comment 6 ben freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2000-07-20 14:26:07 UTC
State Changed
From-To: open->closed

Committed, thanks!
Comment 7 clefevre 2000-07-24 03:31:04 UTC
Ben Smithurst <ben@scientia.demon.co.uk> writes:

> Cyrille Lefevre wrote:
> 
> >> + 
> >> + 
> >> + If you're tracking the -stable development efforts, you should
> >> + definitely join the -stable mailing list, in order to keep abreast
> >> + of recent developments and changes that may affect the way you
> >> + use and maintain the system:
> >> + 
> >> + 		freebsd-stable@FreeBSD.org
> >> 
> >  
> >  also, it would be interresting to explain in some lines how to subscribe
> >  to this list. else, you'll have plenty of empty "subscribe" messages...
> >  such as :
> 
> Well, it's already mentioned further down, so I don't know if this is
> really necessary.

you're right. I just answer in the context of the mailing-list and
don't saw it's already mentioned further down.

Cyrille.
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