Bug 203338

Summary: Sentence rewording
Product: Documentation Reporter: varnishedgreen
Component: Books & ArticlesAssignee: Jason Helfman <jgh>
Status: Closed FIXED    
Severity: Affects Only Me CC: jgh
Priority: --- Keywords: patch
Version: Latest   
Hardware: Any   
OS: Any   
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Description varnishedgreen 2015-09-25 17:01:12 UTC
Created attachment 161387 [details]
Diff file for proposed fix.

Sentence in 8.19 felt awkward to read.
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2015-10-01 15:42:27 UTC
A commit references this bug:

Author: jgh
Date: Thu Oct  1 15:42:04 UTC 2015
New revision: 47470
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47470

Log:
  - tighten and clarify wording

  PR:		203338 (based on)
  Submitted by:	varnishedgreen@aim.com
  Approved by:	wblock@ (mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D3749

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml